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March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
no sweats, we all have pet peeves, though i got to admit, glaring inaccuracy is one of mine... unless the fic is crack and then i expect them.
I know some english folk, yeah, they don't do sun kissed unless you count an even coverage of freckles.
Poor Luc, all the stuff he's been forced into. it's a pity har has to go to such lengths to help him release his guilt. It's almost a pity the kid survived. that sort of mental / physical damage isn't something you recover from with copious amounts of scars, especially since the kid wouldn't have known and probably will never know that it was never his fathers choice. I think I'd feel more guilt over that than the physical damage. It's sort of amazing the kid survived at all. I'd at least be looking him up and giving him so anonymous funding, so long has he hadn't developed into a psycho killer or something. would he even be able to still do magic? that wouldn't do brilliantly for the whole 'secrecy' thing, letting kids like that fall through the gaps. I suppose the Hogwarts staff and so on had other things on their mind. Since the kid survived and was relocated, wouldn't the letter have been sent anyway? well, suppose it depends on what sort of state he survived in. Lack of active mind, lack of letter?
that to the side, oh dear. Poor draco has it bad. I know the 'torture' is supposed to be cleansing, but Draco is young enough to get confused and crave instead. will that cause issues later?
I know some english folk, yeah, they don't do sun kissed unless you count an even coverage of freckles.
Poor Luc, all the stuff he's been forced into. it's a pity har has to go to such lengths to help him release his guilt. It's almost a pity the kid survived. that sort of mental / physical damage isn't something you recover from with copious amounts of scars, especially since the kid wouldn't have known and probably will never know that it was never his fathers choice. I think I'd feel more guilt over that than the physical damage. It's sort of amazing the kid survived at all. I'd at least be looking him up and giving him so anonymous funding, so long has he hadn't developed into a psycho killer or something. would he even be able to still do magic? that wouldn't do brilliantly for the whole 'secrecy' thing, letting kids like that fall through the gaps. I suppose the Hogwarts staff and so on had other things on their mind. Since the kid survived and was relocated, wouldn't the letter have been sent anyway? well, suppose it depends on what sort of state he survived in. Lack of active mind, lack of letter?
that to the side, oh dear. Poor draco has it bad. I know the 'torture' is supposed to be cleansing, but Draco is young enough to get confused and crave instead. will that cause issues later?
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March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh, yeah, last review was by unneeded in case you didn't guess. i've long since lost/forgotten my pass word. >.>
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June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
interesting concept, good story. - um, I think you mentioned in Lucius' dreams that Dobby was dead, but you have him bringing the cup
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November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see more of this, and that we're learning a little more of the plots within the plots lol. keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it's a pretty heavy task redeeming tom but i reckon snapes up for it. isn't snape a Prince though? last surviving and all that? how many gens down do you go before you lose the Lord?
I'd have har wait on redeeming others. he's got his hand full with just these two and himself atm. maybe once they're all along a bit yeah? and who else would he be willing to take on?
I'd have har wait on redeeming others. he's got his hand full with just these two and himself atm. maybe once they're all along a bit yeah? and who else would he be willing to take on?
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i find myself in the position of being unable to back up... and it irks the hell out of me. :/
my lap top fell off my bed and landed directly on where the mouse was plugged in. now both ports are munted and the only way to get stuff from my compy is to e mail it. sigh.
anywho, i'm glad cissa is involved with this. last thing har needs is a vengeful slyth woman after him.
purging voldi isn't a job i'd want. they guy is seriously messed up but if snape thinks they can swing it. good luck to him i say.
my lap top fell off my bed and landed directly on where the mouse was plugged in. now both ports are munted and the only way to get stuff from my compy is to e mail it. sigh.
anywho, i'm glad cissa is involved with this. last thing har needs is a vengeful slyth woman after him.
purging voldi isn't a job i'd want. they guy is seriously messed up but if snape thinks they can swing it. good luck to him i say.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
not sure if my last review attempt worked so i'm doing another.
that s a pretty heavy load har's taken on, redeeming those two. still that's nothing to what whomever takes riddles redemption on. still, cissa you closet yaoi fan girl you. getting har involved with your boys. i'm glad she had a big say in it though. last thing har needs now is a vengeful female slyth on his rear.
that s a pretty heavy load har's taken on, redeeming those two. still that's nothing to what whomever takes riddles redemption on. still, cissa you closet yaoi fan girl you. getting har involved with your boys. i'm glad she had a big say in it though. last thing har needs now is a vengeful female slyth on his rear.
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please update soon
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... Interesting. I hope you decide to continue this some. The spell/potion mix for redemption is a new concept for me. I'd like to know more about this vision of Severus's--did he end up seeking Potter, and how did that little reunion turn out?
Wouldn't mind a bit of mpreg either, should the mood strike. Also thought a push for "rebuilding the wizarding world" should include a good bit of repopulation, too. A bit surprised I hadn't run across a fic with the DE's running a baby farm of sorts. But still, you have mpreg in your other stories, so it's not like it's necessary for every story.
Do wonder how this is supposed to help Harry/Snape deal with their own transgressions...and will the spell/potion register what they're doing now as something to feel guilt over? Malfoy's quite the willing little thing, isn't he? So eager to drink the potion, all ready to jump up on the rack... Have a suspicion, when this whole trip is over, neither he nor Harry will be all that willing to part ways. Not too sure about Lucius, though. After all, his dreams are evidence enough that he cares very much for his family...but didn't he say he and Cissy hadn't been sharing a marriage bed in over a year? His fault, pulling away, or hers, distancing?
Wouldn't mind a bit of mpreg either, should the mood strike. Also thought a push for "rebuilding the wizarding world" should include a good bit of repopulation, too. A bit surprised I hadn't run across a fic with the DE's running a baby farm of sorts. But still, you have mpreg in your other stories, so it's not like it's necessary for every story.
Do wonder how this is supposed to help Harry/Snape deal with their own transgressions...and will the spell/potion register what they're doing now as something to feel guilt over? Malfoy's quite the willing little thing, isn't he? So eager to drink the potion, all ready to jump up on the rack... Have a suspicion, when this whole trip is over, neither he nor Harry will be all that willing to part ways. Not too sure about Lucius, though. After all, his dreams are evidence enough that he cares very much for his family...but didn't he say he and Cissy hadn't been sharing a marriage bed in over a year? His fault, pulling away, or hers, distancing?
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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ack! you tease :P make us think draco's gonna get some and then dump ice water on us lol. another great chapter, keep up the good work, i look forward to more:D