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Liked your idea and would have kept reading your story - unfortunately, the grammar mistakes (mostly switching between times and forgetting about articles) contained within every chapter kept me from that. I'd suggest getting someone to read and correct your stories before you post them as the number of mistakes makes them very difficult to read at the moment.

Very good writing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. To answer you HG4, Bellatrix carved "Mudblood" on Hermione's arm in Deathly Hollows, so obviously she's taking it out on him because she couldn't cut 'Bella. It would be a huge blow to his ego for a face such as his to bear a scar. MORE REVENGE, 'Mione!!!! Make him suffer & like it!! ^_~*

Sorry you didn't get more reviews, but keep going. They will come. :-) I am confused about the knife bit though? Why does she hate him for it? Thanks, HG4eva

Hi there. I like it so far, so please continue! I look forward to seeing what he has to say. Thank you! HG4eva