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I wonder if Tom is fucking first years or if he meant it in terms of new students like Harry, in which case Harry would be the only one. I hope it's the latter hahahaha.

Anyway, really liking the story! I don't normally like stories that jump straight into smut but I think it worked well for yours. You have a pretty nice narrative going as well. Great first chapter.

I really like this, but will someone tell me how to favorite authors and or their stories? I admit I can't figure it out...

I PLEAD that you finish this! Not only is it hot, steamy, and seductive, this is the first time I've seen Dumbledore in a Harry/Tom fic that was completely in-character and NO bashing! The setting is enticingly dangerous, making Harry and Tom's situation spot-on. Big commendation for having a lemon in each chapter. Hope you get the drive to write more chaps for this again.

Bloody HOTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm impresed... MORE???

Absolutely love the direction this story is going :) Two out of two chapters containing smut, great characterization of Tom, Harry and Dumbledore and lovely flow. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I've never really thought about Tom and Harry as a pairing or couple until recently but I'm glad I did because I love your story so far and I hope you continue it because it's a great concept to have Harry go back to the past to try to save all those people in the future. I can't wait to see where your story leads. I thought it was pretty cool to have Tom gravitate towards Harry because he feels the power inside of Harry and then to even feel the piece of Himself in Harry making Tom feel like Harry literally belongs to him. Oh I'm wandering if Tom was joking about that whole sleeping around with all new house mates bit or if he was just pulling Harry's leg to get him to be jealous or to even protect his own heart by hurting Harry first. Or is sleeping with powerful and smart students Tom's method of recruiting people? I hope you continue this and update soon because it would be a shame if you didn't your story is so unique. Your new fan CJB.

This was brilliant!
I never thought I could actually enjoy a harry/tom story but, damn, this is good. Cant wait to see what's coming next.
Love how you can like feel the creepiness of Tom, yet still see how Harry is torn between this sexual attraction whilst being freaked out by him, plus knowing he has a mission to do...

oops, maybe he can get his hands on a time turner and re work that met and greet. If he plays harder to get, he might hold tom's attention longer... wonders if tom meant it when he calld harry his.
this is a 1 shot neh?
Still if what tom said was true... squick factor much. all those poor lil first years. :\
though tom being tom would probably only go for the cute or powerful ones.