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Yay!! Loved this chapter, even if you had to 'force' it :D
They simply both have no empathy for the other person and take everything that they 'know' as a constant for everyone. That's how wars are started. Misconceptions are such a hard thing to break up in the unwilling...

LOved :D Well, even if Draco is not a monster, he definitely has a lot of anger management issues and a 101 in intercultural education wouldn't hurt either :D

hm, wow, loooved :D And while I was reading I was sooo wondering, what if Snape helps her and they got together??? So, totally on with it :) I usually love me some Draco as well, but he is not being nice at all... Prefer Snape right now :D

Go SS for calling Draco on his behavior. Wonder if he will have to deal with LM when he gets home from work. Not to worry, with your imagination and writing style, you will not disappoint. You would think that people who want to be looked upon favorably by others would not be quite so self centered. And at least there is a part of Draco that knows that the way he acts is not right. Excellent chapter. p

I was seriously hoping that she would be "saved" from Draco by her people and end up with Snape. Maybe after she beats the crap out of the little jerk Draco and lets a few dozen of her people rape him so that he can see what he has been inflicting on her...or maybe marry him off to one of their men so that he will have no hope of ever getting a life free of the torment. Of course, he probably learned that behavior first hand with him as the victim many times. Snape could be the catalyst for her people finding out what she has been sentenced to and coming down on the wizards for allowing it in the first place. She may not have been treated any better in her world, but this is supposed to be a show of good faith between the two and her being treated this way should be a wake up call on how they may be treated as a people by the wizarding community. But, Snape as a pothead? he is such a stickler for rules, that does not seem right even if it is just an escape. Love your story though. p

Such a very well written story! I thoroughly enjoyed it so far, even though I'm normally not one for very graphic rape scenes. I do wonder how you will proceed to give this a Disney like ending, especially since Draco has been a downright bastard to Mai. o.o

oh I can tell this is just going to be the allience marriage frome hell. Poor Mai.