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Oh my goodness, I started to read this story yesterday and just couldn't put it down. The moments between Snape and Hermione are so beautifully written, also the flashbacks of Lily. I cannot wait for it to continue!

As always, I love this story. There is a bit of insight I would like to offer up though, I know from experience that when a person is that weak and has been bed ridden like that, that doctors often use strengthening exercises. At least that is what has been done for all my family, myself included. For example, his legs have clearly lost muscle and are weaker then before, so using one of those large medical rubber bands and looping it around one foot, then having the person hold onto the other ends so that it is tight and then slowly moving their foot down as if pressing on the gas or something and then just as slowly raising it several times would help increase flexibility and strengthen the muscles, all be it gradually.

Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!

I love this story. I hope you will update it soon. The characters are so on the money it's wonderful. The interplay between them just pulls you deeper and deeper.

I love the storyline and think you're an exceptional writer. I only have an issue with 2 things. You repeat yourself a lot through the story. I would just use different phrasing if I were you. And continuity. You had hermione cast a disillusionment charm but then made it seem as if she and snape could see each other. I am not trying to criticize your work, which I think is fantastic, so please don't take offense. I love the story and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

Once again my commendations on your brilliant chapter. The intimate stolen moments, the hand in the hair, the fingers laced together, etc; they create a depth to their relationship that is simply beautiful to watch unfold. It's painstaking to wait between chapters, though I understand you are attempting to craft perfection. (I myself am completely uninspired and have 4 stories waiting updates) The raw emotions so thinly veiled in their conversations and gestures are particularly brilliant and I do enjoy watching their banter. All of that bubbling and boiling when he said that she was fairing better than Weasley only to have her diffuse into a somewhat witty retort- it was maddening genius. I cannot wait to see the further involvement, now that the pressure is on for her to reveal his identity. Perhaps it would be safest if she were to remove him to some other location. Her now vacant apartment- with it being just a floo's shot away...then she wouldn't have to be pressured with his identity whilst still allowing him the care he needed- though goodness knows the man would be down-right resistant. I can hardly wait to see where this goes. Hopefully it won't be another two months before we find out. Let's hope it'll be an early Christmas present!

xoxo
CryingCinderella

*doing happy dance*. Oooh, I love it!!!!

I absolutely adore this story, and am so anxiously looking forward to the next installment! Just incredible, my new fave story!

Really good can't wait for more. Awww poor Hermione doesn't deserve Ron to be that way.

Poor Hermione! At least she is free now.

There is no need for perfection, but you do a great job of getting really darn near it! Thank you for the update and their growing closeness. I know it won't be incredibly soon, but I do eagerly await the next chapter. :-) Thank you! HG4eva