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What an interesting story. Finally when the dram was going to start. There is no mare chapter. Thank you for the lovely experience of reading your work . 

What a shame this story isn't finished. It's written lovely, with beautiful details that lend to it being believable. Truely well done

I am really enjoying this - wonderfully written!

This is a great story, I do hope you continue it on :)

Angel :)

This story is so lovely, can't wait for the next chapter~

I am very glad to see you and this story back here. I hope real life, while busy, was good. I am glad he is relaxing with her a little. I hope to see them each learn to trust one another soon, too. I wonder if you're planning to bring Harry into the small fold... hmmm Anyway, thank you and I look forward to more soon, HG4eva

Oh yeah!!!! Finally! This is one of my favourite stories ever...I'm so glad you're back!

I love your story. I wish I had a better way of keeping track of when you update it. Speaking of which, I hope you'll be able to update soon. You have me on the edge of my seat with all this sexual tension.

I have not noticed any inconsistencies in your story (except for the frequency with which you update ;-) ...) and find it oh so cruel that we've been dropped off after that oh so tension built moment. I read it twice because I couldn't believe it. But let me back up to the earlier bits in the chapter- you characterize Ron quite well, as I'd imagine him to be, all sniveling and pathetic. You do the characters' emotions justice as you let them slowly build and play out across their faces, in their actions and what little they do say. The shower scene was brilliant. Had my blood boiling. And then when he fell- the inevitable- I thought I was literally going to explode reading that bit- you have it so well crafted that each word of that moment stands your nerves on end. The kiss- oh the kiss- I just wow- commend you on your ability to make that work so perfectly. It was mind blowing and yet so simplistic- the briefest of moments and BOOM! Please please please give us an update sooner than this last one. I find myself desperate to know- what will she say? Will he try to play it off as if nothing had happened? And for the love of god, she's slipped over so many slippery slopes in regards to her professionalism, hopefully she won't decide she needs to be firm here and now. It's driving me absolutely mad pining for that moment when their lips finally meet intentionally and he's able to ravish her, frail or not. I know that all your mounting tension will make it all the more satisfying and brilliant when it (and they) finally come. Eagerly awaiting this perfect craft of yours. Please do hurry! :-)

xoxo
CryingCinderella

So close and yet so far... sigh. Even completely understanding both of their thoughts, and knowing he's in no condition for such activities, I long for them to throw caution, logic and the rules to the wind. I am glad he is finally healing, but I am saddened by the thought that he will leave to "protect her" and not allow them a chance at true happiness. Fingers crossed for you to find a way for them to let go. I also feel badly for Ron. He's so sad and confused and now alone. I hope he gets the help he needs. Thanks and Happy New Year! HG4eva