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for Tell Me It\'s Over

by KohakuShadow

person delia_cerrano
schedule May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hate that Severus dumped him toward the end of the war! And I am sooo jealous of Lucius with Sev during that time even if it was all a plan? necessity? Sooo glad when he woke up and wonderful Harry just took him back without any hint of sad or anger.
person squigglesquared
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Kohrin, your stuff is some of the best I have read on here in recent months. Great plotting, dialogue and story, excellent sex scenes too!! (fans herself) Loved the gummy snakes as well!!! Best wishes, S2
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I had to re-read your marvelous gift ;))

I can't thank you enough for this! This is so sexy and hot and at the same time heartbreaking and sweet! The perfect Snarry! Harry's loyal love, his refusal to leave Severus is so in character! The first time I read this I didn't even realise that! And Severus saying "I love you!" (A lot of writers don't dare let him speak these words, fearing it might be OOC but I don;t think so. I think Severus would only say it in moments of great emotional turmoil!)

And you even squeezed in Lucius! Heee!

<3!
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. I really enjoyed it. *goes off to see if you have other stuff i can read. ^^
person JanisJ
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Harry's vigil was very sweet-- It was great the way that its him yelling at Snape, calling him a bastard and asking why he has to be so stubborn that brings him out of it...
Of course, the smut was great as well... I love bottom!Snape too :)