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by Pearlywhite

person Persy
schedule August 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very HOT!!!!!

person Persy
schedule June 10, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Love it and it will be finished when!!!????

person slytherinish
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, so I come back sometime to reread it hoping to find a new chapter....I really wish to read more from you as you write really good and in a captivating way =) my sincere compliments
person roadrunner45
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is probably uncessary for me to say that I am a huge fan when it comes to adult fiction stories of icons such as Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Harry Potter. I liked the premise of your story concerning Snape and Hermione, but I am also wondering about something. When I clicked on the story above, I saw that you had publsihed and updated your story on the same day, i.e. July 7, 2011. It is now October 22, 2012 and there have been no further updates to your story. I know that things can get busy in your normal everyday life and it can be difficult to put your words to paper, so this would make it hard to continue on with your story. Another reason for no updates could be due to illness or just losing your muse. I sincerly hope that the latter is not the case, but if it is, I hope that things either get better or you get your muse back. I would like to see additional chapters or at least a finish to the story you started, so that there can be a closure. Whatever the reason, I wish you the best and hope that you can find it in your heart to complete the story for yourself and for the 9,288 people who have read your story to date. It would be much appreciated.
person lechaton
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving this! Really liked you're presentation of Snape's final line of speech - "I am going to give you a spanking, Miss Granger. There is nothing I love more than a beautiful woman taking her spanking obediently on my lap and you clearly need the discipline.