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for Ultimate Experience Part II : Pride

by witch

person lizski
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. I'm actually able to comment (I've been having login issues - that's what I get for falling off the face of the earth...) Oh PLEASE get these two together! Someone needs to lock them in a room together until they, uh, erm, work out their differences! ;-D More, please!!!
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy after reading the first story to see a sequel... and the I nearly cried because there's only two chapters. There had better be more soon or I'm releasing plot-eating phirannas on the internet to gobble you up.

Okay, now that I've calmed down, this story, and the first one, are awesome. I love the way you've portrayed the Lucius/Hermione relationship, and Draco being a little schemer, and Ginny being BAMF gal pal. I love it all, please continue.
person Molly
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*scrolls n scrolls down but there's no more* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *looks to see if there's another chapter....there isn't* NONONONONONONONONONONONO! *starts sobbing* why do you do this? whyyyyy??


hehehehehehe UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Snort! That was fun and funny, thank you! I loved Draco and Ginny's bickering the most. I also liked his machinations to get Lucius and Hermione in the same space. Looking forward to more soon! Thanks, HG4eva
person Lizski
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH! Don't. Stop. Please!!! *ahem* Seriously. After Part I, I cannot WAIT for more of this. I definitely see Lucius clueless in the way to woo someone - really woo them, that is, not just turn them on. And I see Hermione as totally afraid of giving up control to Lucius (because in her mind, letting down her barriers to someone with his past would definitely end in disaster). I so love this pairing because it's so much fun to make them get over themselves (and yes, Hermione is as prejudiced as Lucius, in her own way) and get together. Cannot wait for more!!!!
person Molly
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this!!! I REALLY hope you update soon!!!


...now onto your other stories *giggles happily*
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am going to love love love this!! Draco as a matchmaker for Lucius and Hermione... boggles the mind. lol Looking forward to more very soon! Thank you, HG4eva