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by sappysappysappy

schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Hermione fell into Pettigrew's flattery trap anyway. Oh well. I she should know that doing wrongs things for the right reasons is a trap that Dumbledore fell into long ago,and made everyone around him miserable.
person Draconia Lesoto
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I still adore this, i can't wait to see a malfoy (Narcissa, perhaps? i've always wondered what Askaban would do to that fridgid bitch). Please don't cut Bella! I've always had a soft spot for bad-shit crazy Dark Ladies ;) XD Goyle seems so lost...idk if he's pretending or what, but he makes me want to just pick him up and hug him better (*Snorts* as if THAT would really work). Why is Snape in Askaban? I mean it's obvious that you've broken far from cannon but i'm just wondering is all!

Till Next Time,
Draconia Lesoto.
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I would love to see a Malfoy, and I am very much enjoying this story, although I have to say Hermione is really a terrible psychologist!
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When Bellatrix started talking about being pretty I had the inane little tune from 'West Side Story' go through my head:"I feel pretty. Oh so pretty! I feel pretty and witty and gay! And I pity any girl who isn't me tonight!" I think Snape was pulling her chain with the Master bit. He can be quite dryly sarcastic.
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I was interrupted and wasn't able to finish my review. It's amusing that Hermione used the words 'Potty-mouthed' to describe Dolohov and not something more sophisticated. The whole thing was funny. Is it a one-shot or is there going to be more? I look forward to reading more if the latter is the case.
person Draconia Lesoto
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD!!!

I'm laughing so hard, this is a great idea! I can't wait for the next chapter of this, i love everyones reactions and i hope that 'Moine can do some good for all them. I wonder though, where's Lucious? I mean Lucius? Surely he would have taken advantage of this situation?