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You could probably portray Severus as a neutral mentor and a guide - out of his love for Lily, he tries to help out Harry and gives a balanced view of each side of the war. Later, when Harry is in the last few years at Hogwarts, Severus could FULLY realize how powerful Harry is and that he leans towards the Dark. Then, Severus' self-preservation instinct kicks in, which pushes him to commit fully to Voldemort and then he mentors Harry in the skills Harry needs to survive on the Dark Side.
One note: Harry absorbed the Resurrection Stone? How and why? Be careful of creating an all-powerful!Harry. That gets boring quickly if Harry overcomes obstacles with ease. I would shy away from an immortal Harry and try to explain the mark away in some other manner i.e. someone summoned the stone and the backlash of the spell made an imprint on Harry or something along those lines. I find an immortal Harry really weird because he's only 12/13 and already has so much power without being immortal on top of it. Also it would mess up the dynamics of Harry's relationship with every other character, most notably Draco (can't exactly grow old with your partner if he doesn't die lol)

omg, i can see things getting more interesting from here.

I don't know which side Harry should be on. That ingrained part of me says that Harry should be on the side of light, because I'm a goody two shoes until the very end LOL! But whether Harry be a light wizard or a dark one is up to you it's your story, and which ever you choose is fine with me ^_^.

Ooh please make Snape dark mentor type guy, I love that with him, and it would work so well with this story I think. Either way, I really look forward to more!

The part with Harry, Draco, and the snake was cute and funny. I don't usually read stories with Harry as the lead, but I'm going to give this one a shot.

Thanks for sharing.

I wish Harry was able to grow up without people manipulating him. I hope that he learns to make his own decisions in the future. He seems like a good kid. :(

Peer pressure is a b i t c h. Narcissa was wrong for showing the boys those pictures. I wonder how Hermione will play into this story. I'm a little confused about Harry's birth because unless I missed it Lily was a muggle born.

Kill those bloodtraitors and their offsprings.

Merlin, I do hope Harry will allow his friends to make fun of the weasels, at his party.

Good story, so far. Keep it up. Sure hope Harry ends up in Slytherin.

I really like what you've done with this story. Its showing a new side if he was raised by Sirius. I'm curious to see what will happen at Hogwarts when he is under Dumbledore's watchful eyes, and what may happen with Snape. Please please update soon!

okay, that was just damned scary. I know he ends up dark ish... i just hope he doesn't just tumble into voldi's lap. that he at least thinks for himself. *wrinckles nose. I hate the corrupting process.