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by SpiteSpawnsLies

schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy story. Though it would have been nice to find out how it affected Harry in the long run.
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was rather excellent! :D I normally hate Tom Riddle/Harry Potter pairing purely because most of the ones I have read had Riddle so out of character that it put me off, but THIS is brilliant! I can totally see this happening in Canon! Wonderful. Your Tom is perfect and Harry's reaction believable! Thanks for writing!
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was by far one of the most intense one-shots I've ever read! It was sensual and seductive and I loved the A.N. at the bottom of the story to explain the context of what occurred. I would've been lost without that so thank you! Wow... I will definitely be on the look out for any future stories written by you. Thanks for the awesome story!
schedule March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was arouseingly well written. i do hope that some time in the near future you write again. thank you
schedule February 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning; the imaginary, the prose and even the desire and strange hate and acceptance you showed between the two characters. Supurb, magnificent and the best Tom/Harry I have read in a very, very long time if not ever. These days it is very hardpressed to find a good sensual piece like this and I am happy I stumbled upon it by pure accident. I hardly ever review fics because I hardly find on worthy enough but I feel this piece deserves a lot more reviews. I'm envious I didn't think of something like this myself; after all I love to write dark emotive fics. The ones that leave realling for your own breath and wish that there was so much more to it.

I can just imagine the emotional turmoil coming after this and the shame Harry will feel ontoward his journey to vanquish the Dark Lord; it would be interisting to see a dynamic between them at the end. A symhathy or even a touch of forgiveness that Voldemort was human once and not the dark man every person percieves him to be; before he was corrupted. I cannot give anymore praise as I do not know how to explain it all to you. You should know that you made my entire year even though I've been going through very hard times lately.

Thanks so much for sharing all this; if you ever decide to write something like this or would like to give over ideas as brilliant as these would mind terribly contacting me? I would appreciate it greatly; I am an avid writer myself and I find myself in love with your ideas. If I could stem something like this I would be satisfied my whole life. You can reach me at evil_annandale.twin@hotmail.com

If I could give an award I would so please don't ever stop writing you have a remarkable talent for it I promise.

Yours Sincerely

SnowShadowPass
person Krysania
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS BLOODY HOOOOOOOOOOTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Inazuma
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was super gratifying, unf~ And very well-written. Glad this is a recent fic, please, please write more! Especially Tom/Harry ;)
person Kaitlyn
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this pairing and I loved this story! Tom's dialogue was spot-on and I hope you write more Tom-Voldemort/Harry in the future because this was quite good :) Have to keep the fandom alive!
person Tesgura
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot! I can't believe you had his pic watching them the entire time, that was priceless!
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dream rape huh... creeepy sod horcrux tom is, isn;t he. Though the reality is creepier.