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by Lomonaaeren

person luvdreams
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry, he's in denial! I hope Draco can show him that!
person Talltree-san
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He can fly! I would think for me personally that would be enough reason to keep the wings. But I guess maybe that wouldn't be enough reason for Harry to keep them. After all, he has brooms to do the flying for him.
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, know he kknows they're not completely useless at least. I hav the feeling he's not going to get rid of them in a hurry and when that knowledge settles in, I'm thinking he may have to re locate. Is he going to get control of thm any time soon?
Grins
what are the odds we see Malfoy back in his house/room sooner rather than later. ;D
If it were me, I'd keep em. hell, yeah. flight would be epic.
person SP777
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

1. They
person red713
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I like that you explicitly state that magic, more than physics, allows Harry to fly. Even with giant wings, human beings really aren't meant to be airbourne, and in an odd sort of paradox, putting emphasis on the magical phoenix fire acutally adds to the story's realism.
:-) Looking forward to chapter 7 (I think?).
person SP777
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

You know what would be funny...if you made this
a mpreg out of the blue. :-)
person Talltree-san
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Draco's gonna keep working at Harry to keep the wings. But of course Harry's like get these freaking things offa me XO LOL!
person qwerty
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I find it a little weird how quickly they fell into bed with one another.
Keep going!
person loveyaoi7
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story and hot lemon *c* thank you !! x)
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sing song. Malfoy has a feather fetish. repeat x 2
I wonder if he would have tried for Harry without the wings. :3