rate_review Reviews

I literally aww-ed at the end. Reading this was awesome and you couldn't have had a more perfect ending; it really suited them. Thank you for writing.

Awwwwwwww. this was a touching story :) Both learned about compromise and still ended up together. :) Great story!!!!!

I hope someone does some fanart of Harry with those wings. I haven't done any art in months else I'd try. I have an interesting picture in my head.

Love :) Perfect end.

YAY Harry is happy... or at least happy ish, once more. At least now his wings are less awkward aand intrusive... though he should probably train with them until he's comfortable in their use and control. I'm glad her and draco are willing to have a crack at a relationship.

I did not expect the turn this chapter took. Guess that's a compliment to you, I'm not an easily surprised reader but I was, and in a positive way :P Now I wonder if Draco really told Harry everything about his interest in him, I could be off but I thought 'huh?' when he asked if he was happy after the potion worked (btw great description of the taste) as if he's got another interest.
And the 'Malfoy grunted. Malfoy nodded.' lines cracked me up. I also liked that his sneer had no force and that you have him say 'wanker' really quietly- that way his realisation of what Harry is implying is way more effective than an outburst.
And yay for Ron.

Ah, the infamous outstretched hand. Usually in any other story it wouldn't really mean anything. But between Harry and Draco it means EVERYTHING!

about #14...

Well now, it sounded weird, but that was DEFINITELY a
convincing way of getting the wings retracted. You are
the [wo]man!

Now, it's time to work on this fragile relationship that
Harry & Draco are trying to start.

By the way, if the next chapter is the last one, then
let me say you created a wonderful story..and my fav
scene without a doubt was the flying scene.

It looks like Harry is sofening up to Draco, at least just a little bit...I hope lol!