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person DarkFoxPriestess
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Everyone is very in character and I could completely see this happening! Hilarious, but serious, overall great work!! Please update soon!!
person Elly
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You've done an excellent job of keeping everyone in character and it's an absolutely brilliant story. Keep it up.
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another funny chapter. Pansy's devious trick to take Hermione shopping was brilliant, and very Slytheriny ;)
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is just awesome! I keep looking forward to updates.


person apkblack
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this. It's entertaining.
person colao
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is fun
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm wishing I had a friend like Pansy right now! Although I'm not sure I would want to be around all those nasty Pureblood ladies! I like your characterization of Hermione- she is nice and all but she doesn't take shit from Draco. I hate stories where she is a total pushover! Anyway, it seems good that Pansy has entered the picture to help her out as well. Really enjoying the story and can't wait to read more!
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha ha! Amusing so far, looking forward to the rest!
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a glorious cliffhanger! And I am so glad to see this updated. I really wish I could write a more articulate review but all I have now are half-brain dead squees
person iWRITE09
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking it so far!

A few things I'd like to point out that I've enjoyed
> Mentioning that Hermione's Gryffindor traits encourage her decision to help someone. I can definitely see that being in her character.
> The pureblood rules of society you've highlighted add a lot to your story!
> That the other female ISN'T Pansy, she is so overused!

Please continue :)