rate_review Reviews

Very good story!! The twist was brilliant and also unexpected!! Nice work!!

Brilliantly plotted there, and I read all at once, evil witch that I am. Well done with the prompts!

It's like a car crash; I can't look away, horrible as it is. Well-written and completely disgusting. At least it seems to have plot, and some kind of point to all this aside from Filch, Goyle, and Flitwick just being pervs.

Why am I liking this so much? I still can't get over how beautifully written this is. I read this and in my head I hear the second movement of Beethoven's seventh symphony, which when I first played it in high school always felt that it needed a brutal and silent rape scene to it. (How fucked up does that make me, and yes I thought about these things when I was 15.)

That said, I never would have suspected Flitwick to be an ass man. He has to be eye level with them whenever he walks.

All gruesomeness aside, you are a fantastic writer. I also really liked how you described Filch as having a sort of OCD. It makes perfect sense that he'd fuck a dead chick simply because there would be no mess.

I think you should continue it! I wouldn't mind reading more, I would really like to know who caught him doing the "deed"
I thought you wrote this chapter very well, looking forward hopefully to more!!!
*starsha* (piffsgirl@hotmail.com)