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February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this story. I love the characters you have created.
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A good start. I enjoyed the first couple chapters, but I must ask, what happened with chapter 4? It's incredibly short, and with the spacing, spelling, and grammar errors it seems more like something one might jot down quickly as an idea for a start to the chapter before going back and actually writing it. It simply doesn't compare to the quality of the previous chapters. Regardless, here's hoping you have the time and inclination to continue, as it has a good deal of potential.
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome cant Wait 4 chapter 4 :)
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is so worried about Harry acting rashly but she did worse herself, and she knew better! And there is a certain amount of arrogance in being so sure of Severus' guilt (Was there a trial?). For someone who doesn't want to be thought of as needing rescuing, she has set herself up by not staying disciplined to her job's rules.
Of course, we wouldn't have a good story set up if she didn't have her imperfections. :)
Your writing is excellent. We think we know the story but you keep putting your delightful touches on it and changing the direction from what we expect. I look forward to following this adventure.
Of course, we wouldn't have a good story set up if she didn't have her imperfections. :)
Your writing is excellent. We think we know the story but you keep putting your delightful touches on it and changing the direction from what we expect. I look forward to following this adventure.
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thi story is going amazingly and i cant wait for the next chapter (wach those plot bunnes theyre real sneaky)
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i dont understand the ending of this chapter please explaine who is the shadowy person was it snape? also did snape meant to go in the book? also what really happened to the house why it is on fire? how could the allow it to go on fire if a persons house it tere casles as hermione said the wizarding people thoughs? also is sarah and etc muggle? does she know about the wizarding world???
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thats not how the real real beauty and the beast story goes even if it is the harry potter world!!!!
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am absolutely loving this story. Please write more soon!!!
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July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. I like the fact that the muggle is reading it as it seems the pages will fil in. Looking forward to this story.
Mare
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much! I can't wait for the next chapter!