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for Endurance

by WinterRaven

schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wonderful imagery on that last. I can't wait to see what is happening! The splitting up of the different events was very good, gave the chapter a nice flow and finish. Fantastic!
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no. Here we go. I was just trying to remember if Voldemort was still alive in your story. I guess I have my answer. I really do not like Dumbledore. He's very manipulative. I just don't trust him
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh my god! I'm freaking out a bit. What a mess! You said it was going to get rough, and you weren't lying. I rather liked the effect of flashing between Draco and Harry and Severus and Lucius. It built up quite a bit of suspense. And I wasn't expecting Elisha. She's so strong, though. Makes me wonder if the prophesy is really about her. It seems like she could surely defeat Voldemort.

I'll reserve judgement against Dumbledore until the end ;). He just really annoys me, lol.
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah, crap. big squishy piles of it. i hope luc can guard his mind.
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok harry but actually make sure it's a private conversation this time! XD love this, love this! can't wait to keep reading. fantastic!
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. The care and trust and shiny new love between them. ty for sharing.
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
uh. What a time to ask that question.

I love these boys together. They are so sweet. I can't wait to read more.
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whew. That went better than I expected. I love how Draco is with him. I'm glad Harry's going to tell his friends. He needs a strong support network.
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It just gets better and better every time!
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Super HOT sex scene and I like that Draco finally got the courage up to ask Harry about him cutting. which is totally sad! :( Update soon please