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for Endurance

by WinterRaven

schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAH FBINBDVHVOUEBNUHTETUHNFOPWC WHAT THE... NOOOOOOOOO. HOW THE... WHAT... VNUEIGTEUFNSCPOKFOMVUEH

P.S I absolutely love this story. It's awesome.

WHY DID YOU UPDATE WITH A CLIFFHANGER AND THEN SAY YOU CAN'T UPDATE FOR A WHILE???

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schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head.

Poor Elisha. she didn't deserve that.
I'm right with Harry on this one. Dumbles just doesn't seem to learn does he. Two words, cabin fever. H should KNOW this!
At any rate, sorry for the lack of review but you been updating hella fast and i generally only check every other day or so. pls keep it up.
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
fight like hell indeed! I liked Snape's reactions when she walked into the room, very realistic. I'm very curious to see how they end up defeating Voldy, assuming they do of course. XD but I would think so! ^^ excited for more!
person Ataraxia
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh an engaging plot and stupid hot sex scenes. I could not ask for more.
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lovely emotion to this chapter. Very heart-wrenching seeing not only Harry's pain at the separation but also Severus' sympathy for him. loved when he and Draco finally were together, very sweet and very loving. ^^ still adoring this!
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you! Thank you for not dragging their separation out. I can handle some angst, but when one of the characters is as emotionally unwell as Harry its just torture. Their reunion was lovely. I look forward to the next update.
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
first of all...Your Welcome!

I hate that they have to separate. How painful that will be for Harry and Draco. I hope someone kills that thing soon. These characters deserve to be happy!

I loved the scene with Severus. It shows he truly does care about his daughter, not that there was any doubt on my end, but you could see the difficulty he has displaying his emotions toward her. I hope we learn more about the connection between Elisha and Harry soon. I'm dying to know what that's about!
person Ataraxia
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chapter 25
I really like the fire you brought out in Elisha. I know she was intentionally kind of hollow before, but I think this really suits her. Thanks for posting another amazing chapter.
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such an interesting chapter! I'm glad Elisha is going to make up the sex that her and Draco are supposed to have together. Your writing really makes things seem imaginable and real. I love this story so far and can't wait for more!!
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad chapter! Happy in the part that Draco and Harry were together for a while, but Voldemort wants Draco to be straight?! NO! Harry and Draco BELONG TOGETHER! :) Update soon please. I hope Elisha is going to be alright.