rate_review Reviews

vetry interesting story ^^ can't wait for the battle

I have to say I agree with the above posters about this story. I read it before, and the OC bothered me so much. Now that time has passed, I realized it was because she was so mary-sue. I havent read the new chapters, since looking back on it, the story was so OOC and so strange it wouldnt be pleasurable to go back and do it again. But I hope the next time you write a story with an OC, they can hopefully fit in better, and the characters make more sense and flow, rather than this story that seems a bit....thrown together almost.

I'm confused about the comments. I keep asking myself why do people keep complaining and read it!? There are drarry stories that SUCK but they didnt get slammed like this one does. This is why I don't post stories. I write something for fun and people will be jerks about it. It's like what's the point?

well.... you just confirmed elisha is cray cray!

will you explain the wand ? i'm happy elisha was mean. Harry needed his ass kicked

You know I appreciate the note. You did a good job defending yourself thats for sure.
I feel like youre young but you have good stuff to say. My advice? Ignore haters. Theyre never going away
Please continue this story! You went mia for sooo long, don't leave me hanging :( :(

Glad you wrote the "pre-epilogue". Interesting to read what seems to cause a hitch to other readers. Seems like people tend to feel like they can say how someone should react or feel without ever being in that position. People can react so differently to the same stimulus because of their own experiences & personalities.

ive read this story from the begining, the abuse parts make me uncofmortable, now i get why you write it. thanks for being honest about cutting. i dont agree with some of your note but you bring up good points about sexism. you have a good story, dont give up bc ppl think they know everything about writing.

Alrighty then

I'm stunned at the been there done that review. There are things in the story that I disagree with too but there's no reason to be mean. People make mistakes. The author was totally upfront about their abuse. I don't agree with everything the author said especially the OOC comments but I'm not going to jump down their throat.

To the author: Your story has good elements, like Elisha's role. I keep reading this story for a reason. The story also needs work. The OOC stuff it was super distracting but I got over it because its your story, your opinion, you're entitled to it. Your gender idea is interesting. I feel like people are nitpicking every little thing. It aint a perfect tale but nobody writes perfect! Also please get help for cutting, you shouldn't have to suffer. I hope you overcome self abuse.

If you would like to email my address is jasmineteatrees@gmail.com

I didn't remember this story until I read the first chapter again. Now I remember parts,Harry's uncle abusing him,Snape's daughter at Hogwarts,Harry also living with Snape at Hogwarts. Also,Harry cutting himself. I don't know how far in the story I got and I don't know that I can give it another go. I just can't wrap my head around the concept of cutting yourself giving you anything other than more pain. Relief,control, I don't buy it. The whole subject of child abuse is quite the downer. I've always wondered,so perhaps you wouldn't mind sharing some insight,what motivates you in writing abuse stories? I don't mean to offend you,I'm just curious. My favorite character is Draco and I love Drarry, but your Harry is so powerless and damaged I'm not sure I want Draco with him. Kind of shallow,I know,I like happy instead of angsty. Fluffy or humorous instead of dark. But I know it's your creation to do with as you will. Mine is to read or not. May we both be content.