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by christinegranger

person jojo12345
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
plz write more
person Kelei
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice one! Update soon - is it possible to be alerted when you update? X
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is really good so far. I hope you can update soon.

xoxo,
kitkat
person nette
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot Chapter. I am glad Sev mated Harry asap, it makes him feel safer. I think cuffs and a collar is a fine gift for his Doms to give Harry. Also maybe a marking tatoo should appear on Harry after mating with his Doms. each one will show who his mate is, their hierarchey (?), and sign of protection. I would like to sugest Bill or Charlie Weasley as a second mate. Or maybe the twins. Double trouble he he he! keep up the good work. You have me hooked. Nette:)
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was intense
person Rissy
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I was kind of hesitant because its a plot that is so overdone but it was actually really good. But there is one thing that I'm confused about. Is Harry only going to have Severus and one other mate?
person Celestialuna
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Severus, for being one of Harry's mates!
person Celestialuna
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Celestialuna
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like.
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was hot. Can't wait for more!