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I have to admit, I'm enjoying this one and can't wait for the next update :) thanx for the good read so far!

Update soon!

please keep going on this story. I want to read more. I have a 2 minor suggestions/thoughts - I would LOVE more detail per chapter (what the characters are thinking etc) with out over kill and this last chapter that was posted seemed to come across as a few paragraphs. maybe work on how the story gets posted? I've never posted a story so I do not know how the formatting works on this site, but it was a bit hard to read the big blocks of text - maybe try to make sure that the paragraphs are appropriate lengths?

but I DEFINITELY want to read more of this story and to see where you are going to go with this :)

i hope that you can update soon

I enjoy this fic so far.
Keep writing, pretty please w/ extra baklava on top. And kitten cuddles!
Those are the bestest ones!
No, I'm not 5. I'm just uber tired, and I have kitten hair in my eyes w/ my contacts, and I have a headache the size of Mercury.
Luvzeez! Vestitos!
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7 please?

Update soon!

The site glitched so I apologize if this review is sent twice. I was curious about how if you rewrote the story when you adopted it so that the style would match yours or if you simple reuploaded the original chapters and added an update? If you kept the chapters from the original writer the way they were originally written, you did a very good job of transitioning from the original writer's style to your own. I can't wait to read the next chapter and I hope things work out so that you can do so soon.

Update soon!