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by christinegranger

person LostInYourThoughts
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am curious as to who Harry's other mate is.. I am guessing a Malfoy? I hope it is Draco, but I wouldn't mind Lucius either. I hope that you update soon.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A point I brought up on another fic. Sub doesn't mean doormat. Subs can have their own kind of power even if their main wish is to please thier dom. Their power is mainly to do with being appealing enough to make others want to protect them.

Another point for Sev not wanting to bring up his heritage would have been Voldi. With his pure blood blather he would have ripped into a creature follower... or twisted him for his own purposes. So, yeah, Sev has good reason to keep this super secret.

Not sure how he'll get around the possible violence to other students thing but with the teach/student thing, Harry's results in class could be indipendantly marked, like by Albus or something. Just a thought.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your Harry so far. Hope Harry keeps the long hair. Glad Snape was there to save the day, and his mate, agian. Can't wait for more and thanks for the speedy update.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm doing my happy dance for the quick update, but crying because it was so short, but happy dance for harry sub sub and OMG dom Severus. I Can NOT Wait for the next chapter, "SLASH". Oh please, update soon *o*
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please Lucius? I can't see how Snape could stay on as professor. Snape's knowledge of his own instincts and risk he poses to the student body should cause him to resign.
person tacita18
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love creature!fics. And sub!Harry - I cannot even imagine Snape in that position... yuck! :/

I await the next chapter with a thuding heart :) Good luck with your writing!
person tacita18
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know it is wholly upt to you... but, please... could you mate Harry with another adult?
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*S* very nice
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Poor Dumbledore, he's gonna have a hard time dealing with this...I hope that Snape will be good to Harry, thoug I also hope that Harry will not be entierly submissive all the time...I mean, he does have a very intense will of his own.
When will the second mate come into the picture?
I would love it if you made your chapters longer, cause then it wouldn't end so quickly...
person mnfm
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Keep them comming!