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this is seriously one of the most amazing stories i have EVER read. i read the beginning a while ago on fanfiction.net and was so sad when it disappeared for a while but then for some reason i thought about it again today and found this link. amazing!!!!! super super hot. i love all of it! hermione being punished and dominated by a third year was beyond arousing, ginny's breasts being turned into udders so hot, greengrass chapter was amazing. the hierarchy of power with purebloods on top and harry having to make up for turning his back on draco. i love it! lavender is also super hot as a mistress and neville as a slut ohmigod. have i said amazing yet? lol. mcgonagal training people and harry being taken on walks!! aah! so good. harry apologizing for his "past mistakes" with his treatment of the slytherins was so hot. seamus teaching neville a lesson was so so good and the punishment! your creativity is endless and beyond impressive. harry having to give neville the rest of nott's time bec he's a half blood. its brilliant. u have an entire book here. publish it like fifty shades haha. i cant wait for more updates. and id love to talk to u sub to sub sometime. curlysupergirl@gmail.com. amazing work:)

I like your depravity ^^ so don't stop putting it in words ;)

OMG!

I love this story, Candy has to be one of my favorite Harry Potter Fics of all time, and I wish there were more like it.
Every chapter is a nice scene of depraved goodness, and I look forward to each new one.

OMG I can't begin to describe how excited I was to see this!!!! Seamus and Dean becoming Acromantula breeding cows was kinda awesome and squicky. I'm pretty sure I've never read that before lol. Nicely echoed with Ginny Cow later on too. That reference to Lupin at the end made me ridiculously excited, especially with Luna's plan for him. Can't wait for more (like literally can't wait)

Eh, hot in some bits, rather nasty in other bits. Why would you have Harry lick his cum from the toilet? That is just beyond nasty. Do you know how much germs are on the toilet in a boys bathroom ?? :O That line really made me want to upchuck.It was pretty hot until that point and then stone cold disgust. and why did Harry leave his cum on the wall of the bathroom stall without just cleaning it up with one sweep of his wand? I mean somebody has to use that stall after him...how nasty is it to come into a stall and find cum on the wall? Ew.

He was " hanged by his cock". Wait..what? That..thats not even physically possible? How would you get hung by your cock? If you even tried that the bodies weight would pull down and tear the flesh of the cock. I wish you would go into a little more thought and detail on your torture scenes.Its not hot if its not realistic :/ It just sounds silly.

So...chapter 3. Have no complaints on this one but I will be honest, Harrys just got way to out of character for me. I mean couldn't we have him put up a bit more of a fight at having his personality completly changed 180 degrees? eh, don't mind that you threw in a bit of incest there, I mean this is the type of fic that is gonna have everybody with everybody I presume but once again there was just alot of potential there you could have used by fleshing it out a bit. You could have done a scene where Draco is sleeping and Lucius comes into his room and we don't know until the end that its consensual. We could have had Narcissa watching both of them through a hidden painting..eh, something like that. Bit of naughty, hidden desires that you can't help but valiantly try to fight only to eventuelly end up in a pool of your own debauchery.Now its just like Harrys a whore, everybody likes to fuck everybody. End of story. Boooooooooooring. Theres no inner struggle, no pizzaz, no passionate downfall into lust. Whats the fun of it if he's completly obedient?? Training is half the fun :/

So, a squicky start and not sure what the difference is at this point of Harrys subconsious and his consious as they both seem to be in uber whore mode.Can't believe you went there with his dead parents. Yeah, thats wasn't really great.Colin...started out good but really, he just took him and Colin didn't mind? Do you know how tight an unprepared anus is? How easy it is to tear? How large a cock is? I'm surprised you didn't mention the river of blood running down Colins leg after that one. Also, once again not a shred of hesitance. Yes, he is obsessed with Harry but not even a single mention for the fact that Harrys personality just changed 180 degrees? Okay.

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are back I am happy ^_^

Yay! The story's not dead! You've no idea how much I've missed your updates!