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March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
One mistake.
Petunia Dursley is not Dudley's aunt. She is his mother.
Vernon should be say: "... Master Harry (...) your mother."
Petunia Dursley is not Dudley's aunt. She is his mother.
Vernon should be say: "... Master Harry (...) your mother."
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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi wowoowoww hot hot hoooottt OMG loved the latest chapter so MUCHY only one thing: you said hermiones mums name was Emma then by the time we read the Greek structure part hermiones mums name is helen sooo yea
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March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, the chapter was pretty hot ;) Can't wait to see what will happen to sirius and remus
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and thank you for the long awaited chapter.
Really like where its going with Hermione, not so much Harry with Vernon and Dudley but that's more cause I dislike those characters more than anything else . Can't wait to see what Harry gets up to with Remus and Sirius, maybe he can slip the whole order some "candy" and watch as they slowly become so horny that Dumbledore pushes Fleur to the floor and pushes his dick into her mouth, then the rest of the room falls into an orgy that Harry is only to happy to join. (Tonks, Andromeda, Ted Tonks, Kingsley, mungeorous, Dumbledore, Bill, Charlie, McGonagall, Hooch, Amelia Bones, Sirius, Remus, Molly, Arthur Weasley)
Love your detailed writing and can't wait for the next chapter
Really like where its going with Hermione, not so much Harry with Vernon and Dudley but that's more cause I dislike those characters more than anything else . Can't wait to see what Harry gets up to with Remus and Sirius, maybe he can slip the whole order some "candy" and watch as they slowly become so horny that Dumbledore pushes Fleur to the floor and pushes his dick into her mouth, then the rest of the room falls into an orgy that Harry is only to happy to join. (Tonks, Andromeda, Ted Tonks, Kingsley, mungeorous, Dumbledore, Bill, Charlie, McGonagall, Hooch, Amelia Bones, Sirius, Remus, Molly, Arthur Weasley)
Love your detailed writing and can't wait for the next chapter
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story ever since it first came out on around 2011 on FFN and I really love it but ever since it first came out I've been dying to see my favourite character, Lupin, be brainwashed into submission. I just wanted to beg you to please not give up on this fic or if you are if you could possibly just do a one shot. Please?
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March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your whole story falls on its very premise of blood bigotry by the very fact that Snape is a half-blood, one whose father is a muggle, which makes Harry 'purer' than him, what with both of his parents being fully magical.
Honestly, one would think you're just a prepubescent child going off an wild tangent here. If you're going to bother with writing smutfics with some plot, shoddily though you've done it so far in both of your HP fics, make sure it makes some sense.
Otherwise, I'd recommend just forgetting completely about writing, as the quality keeps decreasing with each new chapter, of both stories, that you produce.
Honestly, one would think you're just a prepubescent child going off an wild tangent here. If you're going to bother with writing smutfics with some plot, shoddily though you've done it so far in both of your HP fics, make sure it makes some sense.
Otherwise, I'd recommend just forgetting completely about writing, as the quality keeps decreasing with each new chapter, of both stories, that you produce.
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know that this hasn't been updated in like over half a year, but I just wanted to let you know - I still think about this story and it still makes me unbelievably horny.
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February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Have you abandoned this fic? :(
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December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Story is awesome!
If you ever need more story ideas, I'd kill to see a full story or oneshot depicting the Malfoycest in Chapter 3. Even that little reflection on that relationship was wicked hot!
Please?!!
If you ever need more story ideas, I'd kill to see a full story or oneshot depicting the Malfoycest in Chapter 3. Even that little reflection on that relationship was wicked hot!
Please?!!
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December 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Luna and Lupin? OMG that's such a cool combo. Really hope you write more soon!