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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can Ron be a kind of toilet? I mean he is a blood traitor and all, just maybe only able to come when he's inside a nice pureblood girl his master approves of or when a pureblood is using him, either as a cum-dump or a toilet. Awesome story, great chapters, cat wait to read more!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would love for Ron to become a cumdump and maybe have his cum production increased to ridiculous levels, for pure-blood breeding purposes of course and to be able to give Harry the meals he deserves =)
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a cock slut and a cum dump
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July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far. Can't wait to see more students become Severus' and Harry's playthings. Have you thought about teachers or adults like Tonks or Remus? Or even Sirius if he's still alive...
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I tried to send you an email earlier but I don't think it worked properly. If it did, great. If not, here is my original idea plus two more:
You asked for suggestions for the candy and after reading your story & it's vein this is what I thought:
Remus & Sirius
Why: They postulate loudly like alphas yet they act like what they really want is for someone (Severus, not that they'd ever admitt that with the house rivalries being what they are) to come and dominate them.
How: I'm not sure if you've indicated when all this might be taking place, but you put it after 5th year (and as Harry is too busy being a cum slave, the debacle at the DOM never happened, therefore Sirius is still alive) you could have Severus slip them a candy and begin their training during the summer holidays. At the end of the summer he could somehow smuggle them back into Hogwarts to 'step up' their training.
James & Lily
Why: It would be the perfect revenge for both Severus & Harry with the state of mind he's in at the moment
How: Dumbledore, wanting control over the 'power the Dark Lord knows not', knew Peter was a traitor & tricked Sirius into changing Secret Keepers with him knowing he would betray the Potters to Voldemort & that he would go after them to kill them. Not knowing if he would need James & Lily at a later date he visited them & put them in a magical coma, creating simulacrums to raise Harry and to be cannon fodder for Voldemort(he already had Harry going to the Dursley's as part of his plan, but they weren't a definitive factor so if they weren't treating Harry as bad as he needed him to be treated, he could wake the Potters up, giving some excuse that the Powers That Be graced them with a second chance to help their son through the difficult destiny that had been placed before him, and manipulate them into treating Harry badly). Dumbledore, foolishly trusting Severus, told him about the two being kept in his summer house. Severus, seeing the chance to get real revenge on his childhood nemesis, goes there, slips the potion the candy is spiked with into them, & starting their 're-education' before waking them up and smuggling them back into Hogwarts with Sirius & Remus to continue their traingin.
Albus Dumbledore
Why: I think this one is self explanatory really but just in case - You can't tell me Voldemort & the Death Eaters wouldn't love anything more than seeing the great & wonderful Albus Dumbledore crawling around on his hands and knees being to suck someones cock or to be fucked? Even if it's to constantly refuse him, it would be the ultimate crash for the master manipulator.
How: Switching his sherbet lemons with the spiked candy just before the summer, using the summer to train him. You could either keep him as Headmaster by day & cum toy by night (all under Severus' control of course) or you could have him retire & have Severus hand him over to Voldemort at the same time he hands over Harry.
Hopefully one or all of these ideas gets some juices flowing for you (hehe - I've had about six hours sleep in the last two days & I think it's catching up with me)
Anyway, Happy writing
Cadyffoz
You asked for suggestions for the candy and after reading your story & it's vein this is what I thought:
Remus & Sirius
Why: They postulate loudly like alphas yet they act like what they really want is for someone (Severus, not that they'd ever admitt that with the house rivalries being what they are) to come and dominate them.
How: I'm not sure if you've indicated when all this might be taking place, but you put it after 5th year (and as Harry is too busy being a cum slave, the debacle at the DOM never happened, therefore Sirius is still alive) you could have Severus slip them a candy and begin their training during the summer holidays. At the end of the summer he could somehow smuggle them back into Hogwarts to 'step up' their training.
James & Lily
Why: It would be the perfect revenge for both Severus & Harry with the state of mind he's in at the moment
How: Dumbledore, wanting control over the 'power the Dark Lord knows not', knew Peter was a traitor & tricked Sirius into changing Secret Keepers with him knowing he would betray the Potters to Voldemort & that he would go after them to kill them. Not knowing if he would need James & Lily at a later date he visited them & put them in a magical coma, creating simulacrums to raise Harry and to be cannon fodder for Voldemort(he already had Harry going to the Dursley's as part of his plan, but they weren't a definitive factor so if they weren't treating Harry as bad as he needed him to be treated, he could wake the Potters up, giving some excuse that the Powers That Be graced them with a second chance to help their son through the difficult destiny that had been placed before him, and manipulate them into treating Harry badly). Dumbledore, foolishly trusting Severus, told him about the two being kept in his summer house. Severus, seeing the chance to get real revenge on his childhood nemesis, goes there, slips the potion the candy is spiked with into them, & starting their 're-education' before waking them up and smuggling them back into Hogwarts with Sirius & Remus to continue their traingin.
Albus Dumbledore
Why: I think this one is self explanatory really but just in case - You can't tell me Voldemort & the Death Eaters wouldn't love anything more than seeing the great & wonderful Albus Dumbledore crawling around on his hands and knees being to suck someones cock or to be fucked? Even if it's to constantly refuse him, it would be the ultimate crash for the master manipulator.
How: Switching his sherbet lemons with the spiked candy just before the summer, using the summer to train him. You could either keep him as Headmaster by day & cum toy by night (all under Severus' control of course) or you could have him retire & have Severus hand him over to Voldemort at the same time he hands over Harry.
Hopefully one or all of these ideas gets some juices flowing for you (hehe - I've had about six hours sleep in the last two days & I think it's catching up with me)
Anyway, Happy writing
Cadyffoz
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was deliciously perverted. It kind of made me want to take Harry's place as a cock-slut. Great job.
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really liking the story, please update soon!
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up! I can
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderfully perverted and filthy. It would be awesome to see Harry filled up with spunk even more than Draco was in the third chapter :)
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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I want to see the breaking of Hermione and maybe Draco or the twins next!