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by TheDarkWonker

person Kenobi
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What will happen when they find out their master is a half blood? and a half blood of lower standing than Harry
since he father was a muggle!
person Axl
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this story is FILTHY! Can't believe I write this, but I totally approve :-) I also enjoy the dry asides and one-liners you put in that make the whole depraved mess a bit more than this total PWP. Some are totally hilarious.

I second the remaining Marauders finally getting theirs by serving as Snape's slaves: I'm sure he'd especially enjoy training, humiliating or using them to work out his frustations as his whipping boys. He could train them as his personal set of tame dogs too (as they're already halfway there with animagus and creature-forms), boot slaves, human furniture ect. Something properly humiliating to make up for his own torment at their hands!

Uhm, with the Chosen One, and so many students, teachers (+ in future the politically powerful headmaster as you foreshadowed) as his personal slaves or loyal followers (the Slytherin students) it makes no sense for Severus to follow Voldemort anymore!
His side is getting much more powerful than the few dozen DEs (+ their children serve HIM already!), why wouldn't he size power himself?! He has no advantage from being obedient to Voldi when he becomes now much more powerful, is much cleverer and a proven better strategist. Especially since Tom is insane and has lost most of his brains along with his humanity in his quest for immortality.... Severus should easily be able to keep him in the dark before disposing of him (using loyal to only him secret weapon HARRY perhaps?) to rule himself.

I guess the pureblood-superiority isn't really Snape's own religion as a very powerful half-blood? Sounds more like he uses a well-known belief and concept for his own gains, smirking inwardly about himself controlling muggle-, half- AND purebloods. Not unlike snake-face: only more cunning and sane ;-)

I think in order to secure his powerbase, influence and later control the ministry he should enslave Aurors Tonks and Shacklebolt. Perhaps finishing with LME-head/Minister Scrimgour? He could either let slave!Scrimgeour be Minister to fool people or take over himself openly. I bet after he'd finished Voldi the population would be grateful and awed enough to beg him to rule them even without candy-influence.

Snape should definitely get Lucius! Not just for the hotness ;-) He's easily controlled by more powerful wizards despite the facade, not very good at plotting, devoted to his family and would probably even without candy be grateful to get away from Voldi or Azkaban (depending how you play it in your fic. Either way by now Severus looks probably a better Master even without being mind-controlled once Lucius realizes how powerful his friend is becoming - and that Draco is already loyal to him!) And it would be a delicious irony if the older, socially higher-ranking acquaintance of Snape's youth would now serve as his own personal slave, getting his kicks from being used as a cock-slave and totally dominated by his younger half-blooded Master, THE ultimate Slytherin.

Uhm yeah, this super-filthy tale of yours is clearly spawning kinks ;-) Looking forward to read more!
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I love this sotry. It would be cool if you turned harry into a girl or something to be breeding stock as well. Maybe do it then have him in a gangbang.
person LKK
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I vote for either the Patil twins or the Greengrass sisters next. The smut you write is really good and I'm really looking forward to more!
person sha01001
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, my only fault with it is Ginny, I really hate her so seeing her in a Dominant position over Harry is really annoying, however I shall persavere as I love the rest of you story. Can't wait to read more.
person running-in-circles
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello I would like to suggest that since the twins can't be given the candy without losing their chose loving selves. Perhaps they could join in willingly. running-in-circles
person Dacrs
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more man on man action please, I'm tired of pussies
person blackrosedraco
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Neville or the Patil twins.
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want Hagrid as the next slave

why: I love gay bears, he's able to breed magical animals that can then be used on the others and he could be a body guard when needed

How: Harry and the others or just Harry go to his hut where he ask them if something was wrong next thing he knows he is being pleasured by them or Harry and can't stop himself due to being a virgin for decades then he is fed the candy

question: I know your using Ginny to breed Harry's kids but is there going to be Mpreg because then Harry could be a breeder as well and Ginny wouldn't want to be suffering through pregnancy alone and I kind of want Harry to give birth to various creatures as well
person 40loner
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
epic snape will have the whole school under his control at this rate. one thing i dont get why would ginny follow snape when he is just a half-blood