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well i wouldnt mind a filthier and depraved harry but please no scat. what i would love to see in maybe a one shot or another story is a filthy harry enslaved then made a girl.

I know I have said before and before but PLEASE, PLEASE use Hagrid I want some gay bear/Harry action soon so rare to

By the way have you already decided on what to do with the Dursley's?

Ever considered a Hagrid/Charlie/Harry scene or a Aragog with Drider form/Harry scene maybe a beast scene where Hagrid watches before fucking the victims ow or maybe Hagrid and Harry could have a soul connection like Ginny and Harry Harry being Voldemort's Horcrux would difinitly give him something similar as well

If you do a Hagrid scene soon how about doing it where Ron and Harry are having sex out by the forbidden forest and get caught by Hagrid who has been crushing on Harry for a long time or who is Harry's mate and reluctantly joins in?

Sounds like Nev will be the one to turn Seamus and Dean by the way

Oh here's a thought what if Neville creates a type of plant that has cock tentacles that Severus uses for potion ingredients and it needs to feed off of lust by penetrating people in sex?

the twins with Harry is awesomely hot!

I wouldn't mind you expanding the first chapters so we maybe get to see Harry being taken for the first time.

Firenze could be a future acquisition to test Harry's limits

Personally, I would prefer more new chapters rather than a rewrite!

Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would love to see a scene where one of the girls gets gangbanged, dont care which one I just want to see her get used in all of her holes.

Wow this story just keeps getting better and better. I have to disagree with the people voting for Master harry though for several reasons. Harry is a complete cock-slut and wouldn't like to be a Master as you have spent a lot of time portraying Harry as 100% happy as Severus's Slave. In fact he showed mild jealousy at having to share his master. Which clearly shows that he doesn't want to be a Master and has no intention of changing his circumstances. In turn for you to actually do this means you have to completely change Harry's personality as well as the reader having to disregard everything they have read so far.
In my opinion it would be best to keep Harry the way he is, though I wouldn't say no to seeing him in even more depraved situations. Sorry for the rant, but I really love the direction your story is going in and don't want to see it changed :)

Gunna throw in my vote for eventual Master!Harry as well, since it seems he's a lot better at this than Snape is (considering it took him weeks, and Harry just one session).

And this is seriously my favorite thing on this site. Please update soon!

This is so brilliant! God it gets me so horny every time I read it! Pleeeeeaaase update soon! I want so much more!

Very nice indeed! However, the same thing has cropped up that bothered me before: Harry seems to have taken over doing the real work. He now seems to be revelling in his domination of new targets, but remains a slave of Snape. I would love to see Harry become unsatisfied with his current level of perversion , and begin to plot and scheme against Snape and, by extension, Voldemort. This could also give an opening for Dumbledore's enslavement, since it was him that, by leaving him with the Dursleys, condemned Harry to years of misery. You wrote that he liked being dark, and I would love to see him go even darker, in a master position.

Are you going to get back to some men soon because I feel like you have been mostly focusing on females lately and I would prefer some more men

Oh and maybe Harry's reward was that he gets to pick out a man who will be his own slave but one that will do him or be done by him I would really appreciate a big person like Hagrid not many slash of him and Harry