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February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how you made Voldemort all loopy, its pretty hilarious! I hope that Harry goes back to being Harry soon, I'd like to see him be a strong Beta that gives Fen a run for his money, eventually! Keep up the good work!
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February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow talk about a stunning update. That was the most well written chapter so far I think. I LOVED how you portrayed Voldemort. Near crazy, near sane, and nothing straight. I'm already looking forward to more :)
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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I usually await each new chapter with impatience, but you did a very crappy job on Voldemort in this last chapter; for a while there I had an impression that I read another cheap and juvenile fic - it is completely not what I expected from you, and I am sorry to admit, but I feel totally dissapointed. Very un-Voldemort Voldemort, horrible and painful to read the dialogue.
Hope you'll get back on track soon :)
Hope you'll get back on track soon :)
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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOODNESS! Voldemort acting like a total two year old with Millie as his Mommy! AWWWWWWWWWWW
Def. My favorite chapter now, and just AWWW and AWWW and OMG WTF didn't I think of that first? *pouts*
Def. My favorite chapter now, and just AWWW and AWWW and OMG WTF didn't I think of that first? *pouts*
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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I love Harry and his pups. The're so adorable. Please update soon :)
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can;t wait for more ^_^ K
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that chapter 3 is chapter 2 repeated. I liked chaps 1 and 2, but I will wait to read anymore till chapter 3 is no longer showing as the same as chap 2.
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow :( poor harry, he had enough reasons to snap even before he was thrown to the wolves. Dammit now I want to see him getting snuggles from his alpha! Ah I hope to see more soon :)
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop you a line about two things. One is good and the other is a nuisance. I very much enjoyed the way the story has been progressing. The bits of backstory from Harry, while horrifying, are fascinating. The nuisance is that your formatting has been lost on several chapters. When I view them there are no paragraph breaks. This error is repeated in the first chapter of The Right Choice and as of right now is preventing me from reading it. It is too difficult. Unfortunately this formatting issue greatly detracts from your writing and makes it nearly impossible to read. I hope you can fix it.
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
can you please re-upload ch 16 and 17? they are still one big block of text and it hurts my eyes to read like that. thanks