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Another nice chapter, I like this story. I hope that things will be better for poor Harry soon...

Don't let the jerks get you down! Negative feedback sucks, but helps you grow--even if it's only in how you take it. Truly though, this story is great and I hope you are proud of yourself! I know it's going to take more time, but I am ever eager for Harry to come back to himself so that he and Fenrir can start to do things right. ;D Can't wait for the next update!

I just finished reading all the chapters and your alternate.Great job lve the story. I was very surprised at how much detail you put into it. I was hoping to find out what hapened to Luna in your story. Melium reminds me of her. Can't wait for morw updates.

Ive read your story since the beginning and I just want to congradualte you on keeping up with this amazing story. Writers block is a fickle thing. I like where this story is going. I love the pairing. I like how Harry's timid personality counteracts with Fenrirs brute self. They are perfect and I hope they settle things with aurel and nox. Please update soon!!

Don't let the negative reviews get you down. Use hem as constructive criticism or brush them off.

I know it it easier said than done, but you are a great storyteller and you are passionate about what you are doing.

I check for updates to your stories daily :D

so, har is something like a an elemental? don't worry about the story taking off by itself. the good ones often do that. just flow with it and see where it takes you. poor har. it's going to be some time before he trusts again huh.
i wonder what voldi will do when he runs out of muggles, try and expand his territory?

Well I enjoyed that update :) well written! And I also want to address the author note you put on this latest chapter. I didn't say much about it because I didn't really need to be said. But I guess it really must. I have to completely agree with your rendering of him! I mean how else would a man who has basically traded his own life to try to make the world how he feel will be best for everyone, and finally gets his goal and finds out his number 1 enemy is someone he can relate to, is going to act? Wonderful rendering ^.^ I'm looking forward to more!

Hello! Your story is simply amazing! I can't wait for more!!

I really in joy the story though my heart aches for harry. I can not wait to see how they use their new found knowledge.

Interesting story! I look forward to next chapters...