rate_review Reviews

Great work here! As much as you build up the angst, it isn't over the top, just a nice slow crescendo. After the crest of angst through, the downfall is going to be pretty bad - Fenrir and the rest of the pack are going to tear themselves a part when they learn of Harry's innocence. Can't wait for that part haha!

Just thought I'd let you know I'm really enjoying this story!

i haven't reviewed for a bit cause i wanted to give the story a chance to develop some. Harry has always been a bit self sacrificing but i wonder what drove him to these extremes. Can't wait to find out the back story.

Would Harry be allowed to know his cubs -;and have them back;- when/if the truth is ever discovered? Would he be able to connect with them? Or with the first babies taken, would he somehow lose that vital first connection?
How long does werewolf pregnancies (male and female) last for?
Is Remus really dead? (Sorry, only hoping that Remus would suddenly show up; that he survived.) If he is really dead, who killed him; the Dumbledore/Order or Voldemort/Death Eaters?
What would happened if Fenrir took and marked another mate, but when/if the truth comes out, would he later deeply regret it; would that new mate tolerate Fenrir mating with Harry?
Does wolves' mate for life? And would Fenrir have to allow the other doms a chance at taking Harry as their mate?

There are so many questions running through my head, SO SORRY!
But I love your story, it's great!!!
I'm a sucker for sad stories with hopefully happy endings!!!

Poor Harry. The angst is wonderful. After all, the more you up the angst factor, the better the comfort is at the end.

This story is excellent and I give you permission to use some of my story.

I have complete writers block with my story, so it's great that you've taken an interest and come up with this story.

It's also great that I could help to inspire someone else.

I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon.

Oh wow, loooved this chapter as well :D

It was a nice chapter, don't stress :) Though there was very little action, the rext was pleasant to read. I hope the situation with Remus will clear up soon. I beg you, don't make it more cruel than absolutely necessary; it would spoil the whole story. There is a fic around here, very similar to yours (the same plot idea) and it's alwfuly violent :/

So far, the story is good. It has a potential, now it is up to you how you will proceed, and I understand that, but be cautious, don't overdo it.

Best regards and a lot of ideas!

-tacita

PS. I would so much like to write myself; however, I lack the patience and stubborness to slowly introduce the plot and not rush into things. All the more I admire you for your work :) Be well!

Oh wow, loooved! So, Harry actually killed Remus? Or is it this typical Harry self-blaming thing, where he was not the one to actually commit the crime? Like with Sirius?

I know you have to build up the plot of the story - but I cannot wait until Fenrir and the pack learn of Harry's innocence after they use/abuse him for a first round of pups. Call me an angst-leech, I don't care! Great job here!