rate_review Reviews

I love, love, love this story. What happened to Harry? What were they doing to him? Your phrasing implies that he was sexually assaulted. Or were they just taking out their anger physically? And what really happened to Remus?

Poor Harry. He really doesn't seem to be getting the whole 'not going to get to keep the babies' bit right at the moment.

I rather like the fact that the success of the hunts seems to be linked somehow with how caring Fenrir has acted towards Harry. I can't help wondering if the pack will notice it at all (especially with their intended actions for just after the birth).

Fenrir seems to be being a little obtuse about Harry's supposed crime. He is completely ignoring the fact that Harry already said that it was a mistake of some kind, not to mention that fact that he told Harry (violently) not to even so much as mention Remus, combine that with not one wolf actually bothering to interrogate Harry, and yet he holds the lack of explanation about Remus's death as being signs of Harry not caring. I forsee much more angstiness and misunderstandings from those conclusions.

Loved Dreamer27 version and I love yours too! Please keep it up. I totally agree with reviewer Varjo, Harry totally needs to go slightly insane when his cubs are forcibly taken away from him. If Remus is truly dead I hope it's his "spirit" that is trying to protect Harry when things go wrong. Maybe the cubs won't settle for anyone,but Harry maybe an empathetic bond?

Awesome work here! Loved the long chapter, lots happened! And I am excited for when Harry's children are born! Cuz the drama will be epic when Fenrir tries to take them away and maybe he'll realize Harry is innocent. Can't wait!

So, Harry iis being excessively guilty again? His actions may have got Remi killed but he didn't do it? i have a feeling if they try and take Harry's cubs, there is going to be hell to pay.

Loved the updates, and also, I like that you are introducing the other wolves of the pack :D

seems fen is only hurting himselfv and his pack doing this. Wonder how long it'll take him to realise tyhat. Hopefully no as long as the dom pair in the other story. Is it Harry causing their trouble and if so, how? Will we get another chappie from harry's pov?

I have such a HARD time reviewing here but I'm going to try AGIAN and hope it goes through. I think the story is wonderful you've done a fantastic job with it so far. Of course it's sad as well as a range of other emotions that will go with what the entire pack is going through. I have to wonder what happened with Remus and Harry and what hand Voldie played in it, Harry wouldn't just haul off and kill Remus, and it wouldn't matter the reason Harry would feel guilt and responceable no matter. I'm always looking forward to your updates and am eager for MORE.

I expect Harry to be at least slightly insane from the packs treatment of him when the truth comes out. If not completely insane from loosing contact with his cub(s). I hope Fenrir will have to work damn hard to bring him back.

I love this story. I read the other authors story but i guess they stopped updating it. Though I love the angst I just hope you don't do what some authors do and have nothing but angst for 20 chapters before giving Harry a tiny break and then throwing him back into another 20 chapters of angst.

Hope you get plenty of inspiration and I can't wait to see how it is revealed to everyone the true situation with Remus and Harry. I also wonder if Harry is going to reject his own cub(s) after not being able to be with them like some mother animals do. Ha I'd like to see Fenrir try to fix that!!