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I understand wanting to fix and touch up, really I do, but PLEASE don't make us wait for the next chapter. A week is to long to wait as is but to extend it...
I love this story and look forward to each and every update, I just don't think I can wait to find out what happens, my mind is spinning with thoughts of everything that can and will go wrong and bad. You know what they say about screwing with a mother and her young...! I look forward still to re-reading your fic but my hope is that you will give up life (and sleep) as you know it to do what you must and get the next chap out. Thank you*.*

Another great chapter here! It's going to be terrible when Harry has his babies taken away, I expect his magic will lash out in the forest. And even worse, when Fenrir and the pack learn of their mistake, things will only get worse. Keep up the great job!

Oh yay, loooved this update, and yes, the story flows well :D

You wrote in past chapters that Remus, James, and Sirius were pack mates, Harry being James' son makes him pack cub, so the punishment is fitting in Fenrir's eyes. As for Voldies idea of Harry killed Remus it could be as simple as Voldie telling Harry to do something and Harry not doing it, the DE's kill Remus as punishment and Harry feels responsable, seems like a Harry thing to do.
I am 'LOVING' your story, thank you so much for writing it, I hope you write MORE and update SOON! I just can't wait to find out what the truth is in all this and see everyone's reactions when it all comes out in the open.

Hi! Just an edit note: sometimes you refer to the healer, Maya as "he" and sometimes "she". NIce story, though... dark with fluff potential! ;)

poor Harry. If they take his cubs he may go mad.

Your story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
I wonder how damaged-mentally would Harry (and Harry's wolf) be by the time the truth comes out? Would it ever? Being separated from the pack, and also eventually the babies, would be a major factor.
Would the bond between daddy-wolf and babies be too strong to separate the pups from Harry?

I'm seriously torn about this story, you have no idea. I read Dreamer27's version and found that I was emotionally responding to the storyline, but nowhere near the level that I am to this story. It's gotten to the point that whenever I see that this story has been updated, I get a giant pit of dread in my stomach but I end up reading anyway, because I am hooked to it despite the fact that I need to read a disturbingly large amount of fluff to feel better from all the angst. Your writing is so powerful and emotionally engaging, but because of Dreamer27's story I know that this fic is going to get a lot worse. However I can't tell whether this is going to head in the direction that A mate to two wolves was and whether things are going to get better for Harry eventually. I know that Harry will be permanently changed by his isolation from the pack and probably his kids for the worse, but I believe that if Harry's situation doesn't improve and he isn't allowed to heal mentally or emotionally etc. then Punishment will become a true tragedy. I don't think the term angst can truly cover the pain that Harry will be going through. I can only hope that things get better given time,

I LOVE this story, but I also feel my stomach sink whenever I see that it has been updated. The story line and plot pulls me in, but just knowing the pure angst and sadness Harry is going to feel makes my stomach twist (in a good way though). Though I can't wait for the truth to be out. Will Harry be unstable after all the neglect he's been dealt? Will he reject his cub(s)? And I find myself how Lemmy will feel once the truth comes out. No doubt Harry's babies will feel more connected with him than their biological mother.

Ohh I just can't wait. I hope you update quickly so I we all can find out!! *bounces around happily*

You're absolutely right, no problem with longer chaps :D Loved this chapter a lot and loved the flashback as well!