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by Holly

person Althydia
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that Fenrir doesn't understand that by doing this he is also punishing his own innocent cubs. Because with how strong the link is between them and their 'mother', it is obvious that the cubs will also suffer greatly from being separated from Harry. I hope Fenrir realises his mistake before it's too late, and yes, I hope that their Goddess will punish them for their screwed idea of 'justice' and punishment without getting the whole story first...
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh, no. you IDIOT Fen. This is going to come back to bite him, hard. I hope Harry still has his link with the cubs.
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear sweet god tell me you will update this!!!! I MUST know what happens next!!!!!!!
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this is intense...
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
P.S. Just so you know. When Fenrir wasn't around but worried for Harry I had foolishly thought for just a moment that he had been leaving during the day to look for the truth about what happened to Remus. Stupid men, I hope Fenrir pays, I hope they ALL pay and in a BIG way. MAKE THEM SUFFER!!!!!!
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. So intense and heart cried.
person Helen
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love this story I hate what Harry is going through. I can't wait for them to find out the truth and feel guilty.
person tacita
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! Don't stop posting! Please! And at such moment, too - you are positively evil! The fic is better than I thought it would be - you are going at a right pace and keep it realistic (no excessive cruelty or brutality). And your style improves little by little with every chapter :) Don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter. It's just cruel, it is! ; )
person Bob
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW i think this is one fic i will never forget, hope to read more soon, and i hope harry gets the little ones back or that they give fenrir hell untill they get back to their daddy.