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I'm always looking forward to an update to this story. I've had so many stories that become abandoned due to personal issues. I really hope that that is not the case with this one! I look forward to an update as soon as you're able!!

Oh yay! Good luck and lots of fun on your weekend away :D

Hey, I don't normally review on this site cause I have to log in, but since I don't for you...here I go.
I love the story, it has just enough angst and tension and plot and everything. I love what you are doing. So take your time, but pls don't forget us fans, cause I am always excited to see a new chapter.

We all understand. This story is one I am following with great attention. I look forward to an amazing update as soon as you get the chance. Have a lovely weekend.

Take all the time you need :) I wish you a happy anniversary!

Take your time. Most people would probably prefer the better quality chapter compared to a quickly made chapter that would probably need to be reread after it was reposted. Also, keep up the good work. I read the "original" story and have to say I like a lot of the changes you made. I especially like how you made it so Fenrir's wolf seems to be like "I love my mate" while Fenrir himself is trying to be a "good" Alpha and punish the "murderer". Wow I used a lot of quotation marks didn't I? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.

I think it's a great update! Poor Harry. I hope he has a happy ending.

A couple of things: First, I love the story and the idea behind it. I'm a sucker for angst and (hopefully) happy endings :) Now, I know this might be hard, but I'm hoping you wait to do another revision until after you have finished posting the story. It is just too crazy to go back and reread the changes you make over and over again, not that they aren't good. I do plan on rereading it each time, but it would definitely be easier on everyone I think if you just revised after finishing. Now, on to my couple quibbles. There seems to be definite disagreement early on regarding Maya being addressed as both he/him and she/her. When you do go through for a rewrite, hopefully you will clear all those up. Beyond that, they are some issues with general mistakes, whether they are typos, wrong words or whatever. Obviously these will get cleaned up with every revision you make. I speak from experience with that issue. It seems like every time I recheck my work, I'm finding another mistake I missed the last time.

Hopefully you won't take any of this the wrong way. I am in love with Punishment and check daily for updates - just in case. You gave me an awesome 22nd b-day present (all hail Sept 8) so thank you and I can't wait for more so update soon!

hehe, one more thing...can't wait for Fen to discover the truth and really, Namile is really getting on my nerves, but that's beside the point. I'm hoping, since I don't think Harry ever saw the body, that Remus shows up and kicks some ass and takes some names to protect his cub! This way, Fen learns his lesson, Harry gets his father figure and cubs back and then Fen and Harry can have a proper courtship and wooing living happily ever after...or something like that! lol Tata again!

I am on the verge of tears with this update! I must know more! And quickly! This is turning into such a wonderful and developed story! I'm so pulled in by the way you've written it! I can feel Fenrir's conflicting emotions and his duty as Alpha! I can't wait until you update again!!