rate_review Reviews

So charming sex and love.

I thougth that is was a good, chapter. Its nice to see when I check for a update, it one. Keep up the good work,love the story. I can't wait to see what happens with Harry and his pups.

Oh we know Fenrir will be punished! Once he and the pack learn of Harry's innocence will he truly realize what they have done >:) Maybe even Harry will awaken completely and realize how cruelly he was treated too! Bwuhahaha!

LOVE YOUR STORY!!! LOVE YOUR STORY!!! LOVE YOUR STORY!!! Is it clear? lol. Can

Ohh poor harry!! Wheres his babies?!! Please update ASAP im dying here

I;m just glad he;s finally giving Har what he needs. Har's been isolated and pretty much disconnected from the moment he was turned. Now, he might actually be coming back and he has parenthood and his new instincts to deal with besides. No wonder he's such a mess.
At any rate, I'm not hanging for fen to be punished though actions do bring consequences and he nearly lost his mate over this. I just wanted him to get his head out of his arse and try asking Har for his history rather just assuming. Rumors are rarely right and never accurate.
with the up dates, take your time and don;t stress yourself over it. I'd rather see a good chappie that took a bit longer than a rushed one that feels rushed (i saw a typo or two in this one) We appreciate your efforts either way but you should be enjoying it too, neh? You're the writer after all.

I really like your story. It's one of the best HP/FG fanfics I've ever read. I can understand that you may not have so much time as to publish a new chapter once a week, but I really hope you are not abadonding this story. Best wishes :)

First off I have to commend you on the beautiful story you're writing. I've been in tears since the beginning basically and am anxious to see it continue. Only thing that you could improve on is correcting your chapters on mispelling Fenrir as Fenir constantly.

But I have to bring up my grievance of you participating in nanowrimo. I see it as a waste of time and effort so to see it cut off into this and so many other brilliant stories makes me hate the thing even more. In fact just reading that in the AN made my mood in reading drop to where it wasn't as enjoyable anymore. I know I'm only a reviewer but I'm still gonna speak my mind, even if it isn't worth crap.

I totally love this story. I laughed and cried. mostly cried but i like to over think everything, you have a few small errors but nothing terrible. I hope we learn how remus died soon. and i hope the pack feels awful for treating harry that way. Please update when you can. I cant wait to read more!!

interesting... is nature reflecting Har's state or vice versa? What'd Har do to get beaten bloody i wonder... weird thing to do if they want him to beat Voldi.
I spotted a typo or two.
Anyway, good luck with your writing comp and we'll look forward to further updates when you have time. ^^