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for Circus Paradise

by calmchick

schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please continue! I really liked the first chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next, and why Blaise and Draco acted the way they did! Greetings from Germany, Idun
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good!!
it sucks that harry saw that!!
hope u update really soon!!
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i can't wait to read what you have in store for the rest of the story
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
some friend she is.
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing and update this soon because I am eager to find out what will happen to poor Harry.
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. i love angst and cannot wait to see where this goes. poor Harry. and ignore neris. if someone wanted to read something with perfect grammer they would read a novel or newspaper. You do have mistakes in your writing but everyone does and neris did not need to be so harsh. There is a difference between critique and rude bitchy behaviour.I hope you update soon.
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very impressive! I can't wait to read more of this!!
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Poor Harry I wonder who put the spell on them I think it was a spell? more please.
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh!! Why do people feel the need to end a flipping awesome chapter with a freaking CLIFT HANGER!!!??? I swear those things are going to be the death of me on here. Just please, update soon
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I hope you are going to explain how it was that Hermione ended up there and they
had sex with her without even remembering what they had done.

Poor Harry. Bless it he just can't seem to catch a break.