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by Holly

schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is going well, I do wish I had waited for it to have a few more chapters before I had started to read it. I am one of those that whimper at the end of chapter because they have to wait for the next one when they want to keep on reading.
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've written so far. Your style is clear and correct. Are the Gryffindors, Harry's friends in particular, going to have a role in this story? I'm really interested to see where you go with everything!
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good fic!
person tacita18
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find myself intrigued by the summary. The first chapter was uite ok, too; though, I'd like it to be longer. I wish you good luck with this story and hope you will update soon. I cannot really say much as I have to base what I say on sth, and one chapter is not enough.

Good luck!
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so is this a repost? not that i care since I haven't read the origial :P
At any rate, i hope Harry is Draco's only atm or he's going to be heart broken. Can't wait to see where the potions accident comes into things. ^^
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like it. cant wait to read more.