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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. i feel bad for harry though. i can't wait to read more.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ut oh. Draco ain't gonna like that. And since this is a Snarry i'm betting the break up will be bad.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Disapponting. You are not improving...
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can totally picture Harry's response, "Expecting what?"
Great chapter, awesome story. Can't wait for more!!!
Great chapter, awesome story. Can't wait for more!!!
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June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The rewrite is coming along so well! One little thing--in this last chapter, Draco tells Harry to rim himself. Rimming is a mouth-to-hole activity; anything involving fingers and no tongue doesn't count. Needless to say, even the most flexible teenage boy wizard would probably not be able to curl under himself enough to get his tongue near his own ass. Just thought I would clarify terms. :) Looking forward to the next update.
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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*does my best mechanised voice. 'Your slashy scene was succsesful. Please write more and update again. thankyou'.
seriously though, Harry's gonna end up knocked up, I betcha. Not sure how Draco will handle that, but since this is Snarry, probably badly...
Going to be interesting to see how Sev slots into the mikx.
seriously though, Harry's gonna end up knocked up, I betcha. Not sure how Draco will handle that, but since this is Snarry, probably badly...
Going to be interesting to see how Sev slots into the mikx.
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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's a little boring so far. I mean, they fuck all the time and nothing else. I would suggest writing longer chapters and not basing the whole story on sex alone; slashy scenes are good, very good but not when they take up most of te chapter. Then you give the reader an impression that all the story is about is fucking fucking and fucking...
Good luck with the next chapter, I am anxious to learn what is going to break the boy's paradise :)
Good luck with the next chapter, I am anxious to learn what is going to break the boy's paradise :)
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess the potion was to make the drinker fetted not a ferret. (male fertility potion)
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I'm betting that potion did more than just give him aa belly cramp, huh.
Looking forwaard to the next chapie.
Looking forwaard to the next chapie.
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i can't wait to read more! sorry but can i ask you a question? i'am new here and i don't know how or if this site does it but how will i know if the story is updated? do you send it to the people's emails or is there a thing you can do to like the story or something? anyway i loved it and i can't wait for sunday!!