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for Underneath Your Skin

by lokifreak420

schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Write more it's good
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Finally, I had completely forgotten about this! >.< Yesh!!! The plot is turning good! KUDOS~~
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far...can't wait to read more...
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this. is. so. CUTE!!!!!!! your portrayal of harry is absolutly adorable. i definitaly want to punish... no torture mr. dursley in the most painfull and aginizing way possible for what he has done to poor little harry.... anyway, this is really good>.< and i cant wait to read more, so please update soon!!!!! (sevy was also cute in this too^.^) AWESOME JOB!!!!
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! You had me lose track of time, this story is amazing so interesting! Definitely will be waiting for more!! Kudos ~
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh interesting. I would love to see where you go from here.



All my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see where you take this I mean how will he survive this... Poor Harry.
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh dear. That's pretty extreme Harry. Still, they haven't given him much to live for and it takes a kind of guts to do yourself in.
anyway, pls continue.
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More please! -puppy eyes-
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry. *huggles him to bits.
So if it wasn't Lily's love and bla bla shielding him, how'd he dodge the Voldi bullet? I love your precog too, she's cool.
btw, your view on flames is very mature. I really don't get why people do that. Don't like it, don't freaking read it. Its that simple.