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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
amazing...but ok..im on the edge of my seat waiting for some action...frankly after all she has been through I think hermione deserves it!!! pleeeeeeeease update soon.. I literally check everyday!
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July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I'm a bit afraid that I'm making myself into a show-off now. Can I take a stab at what those two quotes might be? *winks*
"I'm starting to speculate on whether Hogwarts sorted its students too soon."
and
"And knowledge is power."
Of course, I might be completely wrong there. ;)
On with the review:
Finally! Some Hermione/Voldemort interaction. Now, I can spend the rest of my review commenting and swooning about our Lord, but I won't bore you with that.
Did I mention how happy I am about the Hermione/Voldemort interaction?
XD
Hm, now you've got us thinking: What can be the reason why he decided to kill all Muggle-borns? I sort of have this wacky theory in my mind, but I'll have to wait until you reveal it to us. I have a feeling that I might be completely wrong, but ... we'll see. ;)
You see, this chapter further proves how RIGHT Hermione and Voldemort go together. I think it says something that Jo never let the two of them meet in real life. Something would've clicked between them. Well, if nothing at all, then the thirst for knowledge. I can see Hermione being oh so curious about the Dark Arts. After all, the curse she had used on Marietta was definitely not Light magic. I'm sure the origins of it must be dark.
I like how you've kept that streak of darkness in Hermione. It's something that people tend to forget. After all, she's not like Harry (who's completely ... saint-like). She did lead Umbridge to the centaurs, knowing what might happen to her, so it's quite IC of her to feel that Pettigrew and Lucius got what they deserved.
Ah, Lucius's death scene ... sadly enough, there are a lot of people out there exactly like him, committing crimes and not showing remorse for them. I recall a news report just the other day that is quite similar, where the murderer said (when asked) that he didn't regret what he did. Anyway, that was completely off-topic, sorry about that.
Annnnd, I probably should've reviewed in the right order instead of from the end to the beginning. Anyhow, hope to see the next chapter from you soon, and thanks for mentioning my fic *blushes*.
And not more than 10 chapters? Then I must request for more Voldemort/Hermione scenes. XD
~Serp
"I'm starting to speculate on whether Hogwarts sorted its students too soon."
and
"And knowledge is power."
Of course, I might be completely wrong there. ;)
On with the review:
Finally! Some Hermione/Voldemort interaction. Now, I can spend the rest of my review commenting and swooning about our Lord, but I won't bore you with that.
Did I mention how happy I am about the Hermione/Voldemort interaction?
XD
Hm, now you've got us thinking: What can be the reason why he decided to kill all Muggle-borns? I sort of have this wacky theory in my mind, but I'll have to wait until you reveal it to us. I have a feeling that I might be completely wrong, but ... we'll see. ;)
You see, this chapter further proves how RIGHT Hermione and Voldemort go together. I think it says something that Jo never let the two of them meet in real life. Something would've clicked between them. Well, if nothing at all, then the thirst for knowledge. I can see Hermione being oh so curious about the Dark Arts. After all, the curse she had used on Marietta was definitely not Light magic. I'm sure the origins of it must be dark.
I like how you've kept that streak of darkness in Hermione. It's something that people tend to forget. After all, she's not like Harry (who's completely ... saint-like). She did lead Umbridge to the centaurs, knowing what might happen to her, so it's quite IC of her to feel that Pettigrew and Lucius got what they deserved.
Ah, Lucius's death scene ... sadly enough, there are a lot of people out there exactly like him, committing crimes and not showing remorse for them. I recall a news report just the other day that is quite similar, where the murderer said (when asked) that he didn't regret what he did. Anyway, that was completely off-topic, sorry about that.
Annnnd, I probably should've reviewed in the right order instead of from the end to the beginning. Anyhow, hope to see the next chapter from you soon, and thanks for mentioning my fic *blushes*.
And not more than 10 chapters? Then I must request for more Voldemort/Hermione scenes. XD
~Serp
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July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very intriguing :) It is coming along nicely. I cannot wait to read more!
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July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Well, the quote Voldy is giving is nicked from Dumbles... Irony much? XD
As for movie quotes, what movies? Seriously, I already wasn't a Yates lover but after that part 2 disaster, I obliviated my memory of anything on screen--permanently. So, I have no knowledge of any hugging or certain persons tossing their arms around certain other persons and diving of a height and ... NYAAAAYAY! hehehe! or whatever. *head-desks*
Anyway, loved the chapter. Finally some more Voldemort-Hermione interaction. Eh, it's what we're here for. Sometimes, I really want to shoot my side characters when they try to take over, but then I recall I have Voldemort and he can shut them up forever. XD
So, want to hear something funny? I was discussing the chapter with Serp and we seem to have the same speculation on why he wants Muggle-borns dead. Shared minds. XD Too bad for him, he seems to be too late with Hermione. *sniggers behind palm before realising I am not in a secure hide-out and bolting*
... long pause of no typing ...
... imagines Ms Velvela is tapping her foot ...
*continues this review from my CoS*
Anyway, I so love your Voldemort. I can swoon and drool and stare all day long at his magnificence, but I won't bore you with more long pauses of no entries at all. So, here it is. I just love how you have him move, talk, etc. The bit where he spoke in Latin is almost as sexy as him speaking Parseltongue.
And I love how your Hermione is strong and not some quivering mass of stupidity. After what she went through, her development to what she does and thinks in this chapter sounds quite logical and IC to me. And I really REALLY loved how Lucius got what he deserved. *whistles innocently* It's so much fun to torment the Malfoys, so much. Ferrets make such great targets. XD
Ten chapters? Wow... I wonder how you're going to do that, because this story feels like it's only just beginning. I suppose I just have to wait and see. *keeps fingers crossed for lots and lots of Tomione action in the remaining chapters to come*
Anyway, you surely have a way with words and great grammar and spelling. ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter. I was sorry to hear you had to upload everything all over on this site. On the plus side, that does make sure nobody can see when you originally started this story. *sniggers* It might get you some readers who'd otherwise stay away. But it must've been a bummer to lose all your reviews like that. Just like on the wonderful GE, where all the reviews went haywire and missing, too. *sobs* Shall we email MM about it? I'm positive she'd loooove to hear that we're missing reviews. *insert evil cackle*
And I am going of tangent. I enjoyed reading chapter 5 and wish you loads of fun in writing. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
As for movie quotes, what movies? Seriously, I already wasn't a Yates lover but after that part 2 disaster, I obliviated my memory of anything on screen--permanently. So, I have no knowledge of any hugging or certain persons tossing their arms around certain other persons and diving of a height and ... NYAAAAYAY! hehehe! or whatever. *head-desks*
Anyway, loved the chapter. Finally some more Voldemort-Hermione interaction. Eh, it's what we're here for. Sometimes, I really want to shoot my side characters when they try to take over, but then I recall I have Voldemort and he can shut them up forever. XD
So, want to hear something funny? I was discussing the chapter with Serp and we seem to have the same speculation on why he wants Muggle-borns dead. Shared minds. XD Too bad for him, he seems to be too late with Hermione. *sniggers behind palm before realising I am not in a secure hide-out and bolting*
... long pause of no typing ...
... imagines Ms Velvela is tapping her foot ...
*continues this review from my CoS*
Anyway, I so love your Voldemort. I can swoon and drool and stare all day long at his magnificence, but I won't bore you with more long pauses of no entries at all. So, here it is. I just love how you have him move, talk, etc. The bit where he spoke in Latin is almost as sexy as him speaking Parseltongue.
And I love how your Hermione is strong and not some quivering mass of stupidity. After what she went through, her development to what she does and thinks in this chapter sounds quite logical and IC to me. And I really REALLY loved how Lucius got what he deserved. *whistles innocently* It's so much fun to torment the Malfoys, so much. Ferrets make such great targets. XD
Ten chapters? Wow... I wonder how you're going to do that, because this story feels like it's only just beginning. I suppose I just have to wait and see. *keeps fingers crossed for lots and lots of Tomione action in the remaining chapters to come*
Anyway, you surely have a way with words and great grammar and spelling. ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter. I was sorry to hear you had to upload everything all over on this site. On the plus side, that does make sure nobody can see when you originally started this story. *sniggers* It might get you some readers who'd otherwise stay away. But it must've been a bummer to lose all your reviews like that. Just like on the wonderful GE, where all the reviews went haywire and missing, too. *sobs* Shall we email MM about it? I'm positive she'd loooove to hear that we're missing reviews. *insert evil cackle*
And I am going of tangent. I enjoyed reading chapter 5 and wish you loads of fun in writing. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I have been waiting for you to update. Great chapter. Malfoy engulfed in white flames - awesome! Update soon.
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not familiar with GE, but this is my username for DeviantART :) And I'm glad you found my words heart warming~ Because this is a very great story and it deserves to be praised ^-^ I'm so glad you updated, and I can't wait to see what happens next! You keep me on my toes~
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I need more!! :>
How dare you leave me at such a cliffhanger, I am appalled at your lack of courtesy in this matter!
But, all shall be forgiven if you update.
*kitten face*
But in all seriousness, I love this story so far so please do update soon.
xoxo
Reine
How dare you leave me at such a cliffhanger, I am appalled at your lack of courtesy in this matter!
But, all shall be forgiven if you update.
*kitten face*
But in all seriousness, I love this story so far so please do update soon.
xoxo
Reine
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epic chapter! And a mysterious reason why muggleborns are to be killed and not because they don't belong or are "stealing" magic form others. Looking forward to more.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! Write more, yes :D
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July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
seems promising so far, more please~