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for Hero's Funeral

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

You know, things would be simpler if he'd just be honest.
It makes me wonder if he was ever honest with Lionel &
that's how HE died, because of Harry trying to change
the future himself, which is something that is difficult
to do.

Anyway, personally, Harry dying would be bittersweet, but
a fitting end to this, after all he would at least have
gone out doing what he does best...saving people.
person Minue
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. I guess the Healer is also influenced, which is increasing her fear. I would have expected Draco to guess the reason Harry's lying though. On the other hand, he is really blind in this story. I would really like to know why he seems to be immune!
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, yeah, he does seem to get crunched an aweful lot. Sooooooo, why is Harry lying? Is it just cause he wants outtie?
Hah! Go Harry. Just cause his partner won't help doesn't mean he can't do for himself... still, not waiting for his feet to heal probably was a bad idea.
Why in the hellkirky would Harry want glory?! Seriously Malfoy, come up with something better dude.
person polka dot
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with that healer? Doesn't everyone want to get out of the hospital as soon as possible? She's got something wrong with her.
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:

Onoes! Draco is gonna get into trouble for ignoring that letter, isn't he?

I kept coming back to this when looking for something to read, and I never read it because it said at the top it was the first longer part of a series, and I kept going back and looking for anything that looked like it might be the first one-shots set before it.
Then I finally just settled down and read it, and I'm glad I did! Are you still updating this (please say yes!)
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can almost understand the healeers frustration. Harry does seem a bit careless wheere his life is concerned... It'll be interedting to see how they manage to bring the latest vision to pass concidering Harry is body bound in a hospital bed. :D
And Draco does seem to still be splashing about in the river of Egypt somewhaat.
person polk a dot
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hehehe it's a game of ones up man ship and the loser dies, or is it the winner in this case?
person SParker
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

You know, I'm not sure if you made a concious decision to do so,
but this story ACTUALLY feels Draco-centric, which is ALLLL right
with me.

To me, every now & then a fic DOESN'T have to be about the hero
everytime, it's good to see another character shine through..kinda
gives the main character a break. :-)

Anyway, if your intention was otherwise, it would still be nice to
see what Draco can do, after all I think some readers forget how smart
he is.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ut oh, I'm getting the feeling missing that message goes on the not good thing list.
At least Harry didn't lose his feet completely.
person SParker
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #2..

Well, there's no doubt in my mind, you were definitely
inspired by..something..to dig this out of the recesses
of your mind.

Are we going to see a guest appearance of that Auror who
was in the one shot? I forgetz his name.