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for Mermai

by sazsazzel

person DevilsAngel619
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!!! I love it.... I definitely want to read more
person Hine
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's cute, but wholly unbelievable. Snape is entirely out of character, just openly admitting his feelings like that. It would be more like him to offer Harry a place to stay in exchange for being able to study him.
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it lovw it love it. it's so cute and adorable!
can't wait to see if you write another chapter.
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this but I really hop that you extend it and make it into a multi chapter with the story before and after the one shot because I would love to read that.
person Le-chan
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! not the end!!! loved the story, please dont stop!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more please
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very sweet.
i woouldn't mind hearing more.
would Harry notice the temp difference between the water in Oz (warmish) and britsh waters (decidely not warmish)
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sweet love it want more