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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was intense. If I am not mistaken this is fourth story of yours which I like. You work with two characters, but in each story, I feel like they are somehow different.
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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good grief... Harry just screwed him silly and he still has the strength for spells. I thhink i have a new respect for Draco... He's not as easily lead as harry might believe. It's like, so he knows huh... what next.
And harry thiinking about his job so harshly, maybe the sitch is bring out or bring home a few home truths.
Going to be interesting to see if Harry can talk his way outta this one.
And harry thiinking about his job so harshly, maybe the sitch is bring out or bring home a few home truths.
Going to be interesting to see if Harry can talk his way outta this one.
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3..
I just had an idea, ever thought about Harry playing
a game with Draco called 'Can You Catch Me?' That would
be something to think about in a future chapter, if you
haven't gone too far in writing.
..and the game can be as playful and/or sexual as you
want it to be. :-)
Oh, and make the chase count, none of that one or two
paragraphs stuff. :-P
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forgot to mention in last review, I did have a cockatiel,
it's not the same as having a cockatoo though or an African
gray...
I just had an idea, ever thought about Harry playing
a game with Draco called 'Can You Catch Me?' That would
be something to think about in a future chapter, if you
haven't gone too far in writing.
..and the game can be as playful and/or sexual as you
want it to be. :-)
Oh, and make the chase count, none of that one or two
paragraphs stuff. :-P
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forgot to mention in last review, I did have a cockatiel,
it's not the same as having a cockatoo though or an African
gray...
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:
First of all, I love Draco! I'm so glad he's the other main character, because I most definitely want to see more of him here. I'm not sure about Harry (I don't hate him, but I prefer him in context with Draco) and Fovea is becoming a favourite character.
I hate Robards. I think he's behind it, with a personal grudge against Malfoy being the reason he's so set on Harry arresting him with a guilty verdict.
Overall, I like the set-up too. Its unusual, but so far, handled well, and the little dribs and drabs of information you're handing out are keeping me interested.
First of all, I love Draco! I'm so glad he's the other main character, because I most definitely want to see more of him here. I'm not sure about Harry (I don't hate him, but I prefer him in context with Draco) and Fovea is becoming a favourite character.
I hate Robards. I think he's behind it, with a personal grudge against Malfoy being the reason he's so set on Harry arresting him with a guilty verdict.
Overall, I like the set-up too. Its unusual, but so far, handled well, and the little dribs and drabs of information you're handing out are keeping me interested.
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow has harry in any slash fic been so composed and rational?
i think no.It's almost sociopathic.'I want him'why would he taste nice with the fish?LoL
i think no.It's almost sociopathic.'I want him'why would he taste nice with the fish?LoL
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Smooth Harry, very smooth. Still, what crawled up Robards but and died? he really must have a LOT riding on this and it'll be interesting to find out why. ^^ The fact that Draco is gun shy and there fore harder to suduce makes it all the more interesting.
I'm glad Ron and Mio are understanding ish about Harry's job... though who woulda picked Neville to go off the moral deep end about it. :P
anyway. I'm enjoying very much. Look forward to the next enstalment. ^^
I'm glad Ron and Mio are understanding ish about Harry's job... though who woulda picked Neville to go off the moral deep end about it. :P
anyway. I'm enjoying very much. Look forward to the next enstalment. ^^
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, wish the chapters were longer!
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is very original and fun to read. I love the playfulness (and sexyness) of your mature Harry.
Can't wait to read more.
Can't wait to read more.
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 2:
Hahaha! I completely agree with Harry here. This is certainly going to be fun! I really like this dynamic so far. I also rather enjoy the fact that Harry has a rather bossy pet cockatoo. I wonder if Fovea will like Draco when they meet. Sidenote: My captcha has the word "hogshead" in it, haha!
Hahaha! I completely agree with Harry here. This is certainly going to be fun! I really like this dynamic so far. I also rather enjoy the fact that Harry has a rather bossy pet cockatoo. I wonder if Fovea will like Draco when they meet. Sidenote: My captcha has the word "hogshead" in it, haha!
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
YES, indeed! This story DOES sound like it's going to be fun. :-)
It's been a while since I've seen Harry play any coy & mischievious
roles in your story and Draco is wanting to play seducer, but will
wind up probably as the seducee. :-)
By the way, ur cockatoo is QUITE the scene stealer, I was close to
getting one 8 years ago, but couldn't afford one at the time. It's
a little late in my life to get one now.
Anyway, loving this...
YES, indeed! This story DOES sound like it's going to be fun. :-)
It's been a while since I've seen Harry play any coy & mischievious
roles in your story and Draco is wanting to play seducer, but will
wind up probably as the seducee. :-)
By the way, ur cockatoo is QUITE the scene stealer, I was close to
getting one 8 years ago, but couldn't afford one at the time. It's
a little late in my life to get one now.
Anyway, loving this...