rate_review Reviews

This seems fun and changeable so far. I want to see how far you can flex this.

His Actium is good.

All in all I loved the idea that you explored here but I thought many things were confused and unsatisfactory. Like for instance the fact that Robards reason for wanting to take down Draco was not the plausible one of having a rival business but the rather pathetic "because I hate him." Perhaps you were hinting at prejudice against Malfoy for his past actions but you didn't build up people's prejudices against him well enough within the story for it to work. This is just an example but overall I feel the story wasn't very well rounded and poorly finnished. I'm sorry to have to say this about one of my favourite authors but I am being honest and I'm sure many people did love this story.

*Eowyns elixure

Harry the bait. *grins.
This story finished off vert nicely and I'm glad draco has come to see his unrealistic view point. They can try for a true relationship now. *raises a toast to them.

This was a fantastic work. Really well-written. Harry's inner dialogue was amazing and the way you tweaked his personality was beautiful and totally believable. I loved Fovea; I have a conure who shows ALL the same behaviours. Every time Fovea pooped I laughed to myself; to love a bird you have to put up with a lot of shit.

about the end...

That was good, it ended just right..with no questions
lingering. Now, we just need a sequel about the bird! :-D

Wow this was an emotional chapter. Talk about tension.
Both Draco and Harry have some strong viewpoints. The conversation that they had was...akward. Draco struggling to find the right words and Harry loosing his temper. I hope they can find a way to understand each other, because their both right in a way. While it is understandable that Harry does not want to wallow and is sick and tired of hearing the same accusations, it is also understandable that Draco 'misses' the more warm and care-free harry from school, after all, the current Harry can be a bit cold and sometimes even creepy. Perhaps Harry must find his inner-child again ;-)

about #9...

Damn, that was some heavy conversation towards the
end, with Harry laying it down on the line. I think
I see what is wrong with Draco & part of it is his
fascination that he has with Harry, but the problem
is he still sees Harry as the young man who always
took the moral ground & would NEVER..EVER..taint
himself in anyway.

Now, he has to wrap his pretty lil' head around the
fact Harry is now a different type of animal.

About that fascination, I think it built up subtly over
the years & he saw Harry in a certain way, as the perfect
Gryff', now he has to readjust.

about #8...

Hmm...sounds like it's about to get tricky.

..and of course, the meeting between Fovea &
Draco was humourously priceless. :-)

'humourously priceless'..yeah they do sound
weird together.

I'm not sure if I asked, but did you have a
bird once?

i know he feels har has a lot to make up for but draco is sure being a demanding, insecure lil brat, ain't he.
at any rate, i hope this gamble is worth it.

about #7..

Okay, I know how well cockatoos can talk, but I have to
admit that was a tad freaky for a second. :-)

I see you 'projecting' through Harry here, though it IS
a good scene between Harry & Ron, with Harry trying to
convey how he feels about the situation & trying to let
his friend know that all of this was HIS choice & he's not
that little boy anymore from Hogwarts.

...and he's not going to have that picture perfect family
EVERYone expected him to have. Hell, he might try to have
a different type of nuclear family.

(I'm getting tired, to a certain extent)
well now, looks like you have email coming...