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oh oh, i hope that doesn't come back to bite him. I am very glad he didn't use that hasty sectumsempra here. It wasn't needed.

I hate it when ppl put in warning "just in case" sometimes you want to read about something and you look at the warnings and you think the story has it in it, and you waste your time reading it and finding it lacking then you just get pissed and don't enjoy the story. Can you not add warnings as they come along???

>.> I spelled write wrong........failure u.u

Wow. I'm hooked and can't wait to read more. As for who was who, one bit in particular stood out to me:

"And the worst part is, your life matters more. I'd plead for it...die for you...give up and give in and give myself over if I thought it would spare you their wrath...their hatred...your death at their hands."

That decided it for me. Harry would not have to worry about death at the hands of the Order if he and Draco were found out; only Draco risks that severe of a punishment from his own side.

Your right you are good at writing. Hope to hear more

wow, messed up. I'm assuming it's Draco doing the main speach part... though Harry doesn't really do the kneeling thing.
Pain is good. Lets you knoow you're alive.

Very Nice. I see this as being more Draco's words than Harry's. Because I can't ever see Harry turning sides, it just wouldn't be him if he did, but I could definitely see him asking Draco to do it. Also I don't think that Draco would ever ask 'the boy who lived' to follow the person who killed his parents. They also seem like Draco's words because I don't think Harry would ever think he had a master. They just feel more like Draco's to me. >.> Anyway, you wright well, as you said. I'm curious to see how this will play out. I can feel the emotion in the words, the passion and sincerity of them. It makes me feel pity for the speaker. Or sympathy. Possibly both.

Cheers. E ~