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by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And now Draco is asking for more than that. I wonder if Har is up to delivering. I can see the were's point of view. Having help would be a good thing indeed.
person AlterEquis
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

Back in town again to find two chapters of the ashborn waiting for me!

Still very curious to find out what will happen, with the alliance, the vampires and between Harry/Snape/Draco.

Cheers
person oOMissGOo
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh I like this story so much plot *smirk*
but I can't deny, that I am curious about the next chapters, I love to see the... wait... german: 'Wandel' (30 sec later and a new tab with leo.org) change in the relationship, not only the slash one, no I mean the superior one, I had the feeling that Harry was from his mind above the other two and now he is overwhelmed by the situation.. oh I like it
Liebe Gr
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, as first sessions go that wasn't to bad... still kinda rough though.
I wonder how long it will be before the alliance isn't a hobby any more.
person Shadowdog85
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update! I can't wait until next Monday! I love your story, it's one of my favorites.
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, serious and major turning point of turning point i ness. Maybe Har can start thinking of the pair as something other than 't enemy' Snape especially. Interesting that there were no lingering vampy effects.
The Dursleys should be brought up on charges of child abuse and it's a pity dumbles is dead as he should have been as well for leaving harry there in the first place and not checking regularly to see that he was cared for at least physically.
person Idunn
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to make an account in order to properly review this story.

I love the depth you've given each character. The way you've altered what happened during the war, the character definition, the relationships between Harry and his friends, and then the way Severus, Draco, and Harry all react together, it's just...
It comes together in one really breath taking story.

I usually avoid chapter stories like the plague. However, I really am glad I took a chance on Ashborn.
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is your cruelest cliffhanger yet. T^T
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. *winces on Harry's behalf. Not my idea of fun. Still, Gooooooooooooooooooo Draco! Nice timing man. Well done. And now Snape is going to get a crash course on all things Harry... good luck with that old son.
looking forward to the next chappie.
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, that adds complications... though Draco got one thing he wanted... sort of. I think Harry's hero complex will hold him there though or at least influence him greatly to stay. Sev making the kitty bot is interesting. I hope Draco likes it.