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for Ashborn

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really do like the story and the premise and what not
person Tsubame
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Wish youhad the time to write this more often so I could read more. XD You're doing great and I like Corners. XD
person AlterEquis
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well new try then!

I really like the water people, are they your invention?
Nice to see some Draco/Severus in this chapter and I wouldn't mind some attention from harry (a).

cheers
person AlterEquis
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
<3 Waterpeople! Mmm just wondering, what kind of trouble will they cause?

Thx for writing os much good stuff!
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, that's going to add an entirely new dynamic indeed. I think draco is finally taking the right approach with Har though.
person Idunn
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really cannot wait to see how Harry settles down. It seems that he has a bit further to go than the other two, at the moment.
But hey, at least he's got his reactions back!
person AlterEquis
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol Snape is trying his hardest in this chapter.

Like joehoeDraco, Harry I'm here! Joehoe!
But then in a Snape like mannner.

Funny how it's Draco, Harry and Snape, instead of Severus.

Thx for this chapter dear.
person Shadowdog85
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. I love your writing, and your story is one of the best too. Your so talented. Thank you for updating, I can't wait for next Monday.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hehe. Draco's so HAPPY to have something that focuses on him and him alone once more. Something of his own. Such simple desires.
Snape and Har on the other hand... It's hard to tell which way they'll bounce. They're so... brittle with each other.
person AlterEquis
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah another chapter!

So the band between Harry and Draco is forming, or tightening. Where does that leave Snape? Hope to find out soon (a).

Keep it up!