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by Lomonaaeren

person AlterEquis
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoop Whoop! A kiss!

but even better they are all thinking about eachother!C
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now, THAT was most interesting. Har has a bit of breathing space but i don't think he's going to be able to 'run' for ever. It's a lot to think about and those vows... Well, something sure seems to have crawled up Mio's but and died. I hope they don't expect Har to just pick up where he left off.
person Shadowdog85
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love blushing Harry, although it makes me wonder. How much experience with relationships does Harry have? What with the war and all. Should be really interesting to see how he handles both Draco's and Severus' desire for him. Great story, love it!
person AlterEquis
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Things seem to go so wel that it makes me wonder when it'll crash again.
But maybe they'll start to come together.

I still realy like Corners too!
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry stared at him.
person AlterEquis
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So they are starting to come around to each other hmmmm nice. Things are slowly developing on the personal level

"Potter's grin widened. "Are you instructing me in Legilimency or in sex?" Brilliant!
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, that's a lot to chew on. Har's going to have quite a bit of mental digesting to do.
Heh, on the way there Har seemed almost manic. Almost scary even.
I'm with Snape on this one, I don't think Har is quite ready to know Snape is attracted to him... and I don't think Draco is quite ready to share either.
person Shadowdog85
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great, it really pushed the story forwards and I can't wait now to read what happens next when Harry ventures into Snape's mind. Thank you for the update!
person AlterEquis
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another chapter!

One hell of a way to uppen the stakes, Harry in Snape's mind.
I'd liek to see how that part works out.

Cheers
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES and progress is being made! harry seems more sure of himself now. Nice turn around on Ron. Har will make a hell of mind doc want's he gets his bits sorted. I think it'll be good for snape to find out that Har won't go blurting his secrets to all and sundry.