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for Ashborn

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol. harry you little reble rouser you. :P
Still, a man, especially a captive man, needs a hobby and they will likely be better for a bit of constructive subversion. I go6tta admit I agree with Harry. The life of a leashed dog isn't much of a life, especially for a free thinker. Sheould be interersting to see what Draco does with his new subversive thoughts. ^^
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! once again: FABULOUS!! just loving the story! i really am already angsting over when severus will figure out that not only draco, who he sees as a mere "child", but BOTH of them got played by harry! hahahaha! eek! sooooo exciting!! <3
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. This comes of having no to argue with, no one who will stimulate you through bringign other world views and ideas into the light with you. Ultimately i think Harry will be good for them cause a closed society stagnates. You need change, new ideas based on a solid foundation to grow and be dynamic. And Sev and Draco both need to realize that this ISN'T schoolo boy Harry (and even him they might not have had a realistic impression of. This Harry fought a war. Of course he's going to think and react differentlllly to what they know. should be quite a shock to the system when they finally face that thought ^^ fun fun
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read more
person Emma
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is going to be amazing. I feel it already. :) The setup of the place, the characters, the story are all amazing! I want to be in the future where I read the next chapter. I love Harry's adult character and the idea that all of them have flaws. Severus can't always be right. Anyways, I'm going crazy for this new story idea!
person red713
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm always amazed with the number of projects you are able to work on at one time. :-) And you even finish them!

I'm really look forward to reading more of "Ashborn." I'm a sucker for a mature!Harry.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that's the problem dealing with those who have no initiative constantly. It dulls you so that you no longer have the ingrained people watching senses you would if you were dealing with those who have a free will. Snape, as an ex spy master, should know that. Ah well, at least he's admitted he makes mistakes.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!! Love the way you are developing the characters - how Harry manipulates Snape's prejudices is fantastically perceptive. Can't wait for more!!
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really enjoying this so far! Can't wait for more!
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one:

Ooh. I am very interested in seeing more from this. A credible setup, and it makes me want to know more.